i love it! i hope the next chapter

You'll have to edit your chapters because they are quite hard to read, I'll give you an example:

Theresa spoke to her gently, "It's ok. Breath in... and out. Do you have a name?"

The lady, noticeably less anxious, "I... I... I do not recall... I'm sorry."

See? That's what I'm explaining to you, things like that, so please re-edit your chapters so it can be more readable for me and the other authors. It won't give us a headache. I hope you don't take this as a flame, it's just a critic that I'm giving to you.