Not bad. Pretty good, although I think that Tamaki's tits are perfect already and making them beach ball sized is a disservice to her cuteness. Other than that, Good job. Guacamole nigga penis, my dude.

Nice chapter really like to see more chapters where shinra interacts with the white clothes girls specialy arrow and haumea in the future if you decide continue

This is one of my favorite parts to your story, I really love Iris and Shinra together haha. I hope you make more in the future.

Make more, bro

This what I was waiting for, my brother

I've always imagined Arrow to be one of the smuggest characters if she weren't a part of Evangelists.

Her voice would still maintain the monotone but would be dripping with casual dry humor that would make people go, "Wait, was that a joke?" or "Did you just insult me?"

Quite a good chapter.

Great chapter as always my friend keep up the good work

That was cute as fuck

Quite good.

So that was time travel from Shinra's kick? Interesting.

So when is Tamaki's lucky leacher syndrome going to result in a three way with Sister Iris?

Great new chapter this story is great keep up the fantastic work

Keep it up I love this story please.

Really fun.

Awesome chapter as always my friend keep up the outstanding work