Reviews for The Last Dance
Lola chapter 1 . 3/18
Aww, what a sweet story. Shame a dance only lasts a few minutes...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
I kinda want to see what happens next
amsev chapter 1 . 1/27
Lovely!
Bren Gail chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Brilliantly written. I think the essence of the characters were portrayed beautifully. I can't help, but be curious about the staff's reactions and the betting pool. This one shot definitely can stand alone, but I do hope that there is a follow up her even though the open ending was wonderfully executed.
HelenFD chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
No upperclassmen in England.
Also for future reference: No 4th July, Thanksgiving, Santa Claus [Father Christmas], boardwalks [pavement], Fall [Autumn]. Beavers, bears, wolves, have all been hunted to extinction centuries ago. Mocking birds, humming birds and skunks are American. We know what they are but these errors are jarring and make the story less authentic. I recently read a story where the author used 'candy' in the first quarter of the story and 'sweets' in the remaining three quarters. Another frequent error is using store instead of shop. Yesterday I came across 'drug' being used as the past tense of the verb to drag. I searched and found that drug is now being used in speech in some states of America but is not acceptable in written work.
Apparently some British writers are making similar mistakes in the Buffy fandom.
lillalil chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
Wonderful...!
Rule23 chapter 1 . 10/19/2019
This is so freaking cute!
PeridotStar chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
Loved it—thanks for writing!
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
And then?
Hada chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
It’s so sweet! Thank you!
brooken394 chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
This is so sweet. Loved it! Thank you for sharing
cagzclarine chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Tout à fait prometteur...
ArtemisBare chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Yeeeees. Here for it
FantasyGirl20 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Love this! I hope there is more
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2019
I like this.
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