Reviews for Not This Time
B4Reality chapter 31 . 8/10
"Probably used some magical power from his fucking eyebrow. Makes as much damn sense."

I'm now imagining Erwin with a funny eyebrow waggle that causes mind control xD

Anyway another fantastic chapter. Loving the frequent updates
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 31 . 8/10
You should have had Historia prick her finger instead of cut her arm.

Ymir better exact payback for Historia having to cut herself like that.
Noob6 chapter 31 . 8/9
i read chapter 131, damn i hope this fic wont go down like it is in canon,
Astarte celeste chapter 31 . 8/9
YOSH, THE REVELATION OF THE FEMALE TITAN HOPEFULLY COMES SOONER! Thanks for the update author-sama
Miqila chapter 31 . 8/7
So my mind just drifted off to the scenes of Eren and the original Levi Squad while reading this and it just feels so wrong after reading chapter 131... how did he turn in to THAT!?

Also the scene between Erwin and Historia made me think how I really want a full blown mind fuck battle between Erwin and time traveler Armin. And I'll put my money on Armin.
Guest chapter 31 . 8/6
Killing comrade by accident is way worse then intentionally killing enemies.
SlayerFan66 chapter 31 . 8/5
When is levi gonna figure out mikasa is the female titan?
David Daniel B chapter 31 . 8/5
I love how Historia was able to manage the situation was really good for me.
By the way the tragedy that happens in Connie villages will happen again?.If not, what could do Armin,Mikasa and Historia to stop it.
Thanks again for the new chapter.
See ya
Astarte celeste chapter 30 . 8/3
Looking forward for the next chapter. I'm so excited to see how erwin eould react to knowing Mikasa is the female titan agahahahahagagah
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 30 . 7/26
That pause in Ragako, it had better not have been because of Zeke! That's just destroying people's lives when the opportunity to save them is the better choice.
David Daniel B chapter 30 . 7/26
OK this is going to be tense situations right around the corner and I love it
I would like to see the reaction of Historia in the next chapter.
Thanks
Isil'zha BLZ chapter 30 . 7/25
Gah! You can't end the chapter there, that's just cruel! I need her reaction now!

Yeah, while chapter 130 was great, it's clear that Isayama is aware of the shipping wars, and was deliberately trolling people by providing hints but not confirming anything either way. Knowing him Attack on Titan will end without it ever being confirmed who the father actually was, giving the diehard shippers something to argue about for years to come.

I'm embarrassed to admit it took me longer then it should have to understand Levi's joke. Also, while we got Erwin's thoughts on Reiss, I'm curious as to what his thoughts on Armin and Mikasa are at this point in time. Something I've been meaning to mention, I'm slightly confused as to why Erwin suspected Armin of being the Armored Titan, seeing how Armin was with Eren in Shiganshina when the Armored Titan broke through the wall, and would therefore have an airtight alibi given that Erwin trusts Eren. Was it just because of Armin's sudden improvement during training? And if that's the case, does Erwin suspect the possibility of Titans being transferred?
B4Reality chapter 29 . 7/16
I only just found this fic late last night and I wish I'd read it sooner because I'm completely captivated now! I've often wondered about the concept of a time jump ever since those time loop theories started circulating. I'm so thrilled that Armin and Mikasa are the ones sent back and not Eren, gives an interesting and new take on the trio's dynamic as a whole. Plus Mikasa and Armin have always been my two favorite characters, and best boy Armin deserves a lot more attention and credit than he's been given by the fandom imo.

I live for the moments where Armin and Mikasa's sneaking off is misconstrued as them getting freaky xD so hilarious! Was actually expecting more jealousy from Eren honestly, but I'm glad that this isn't just some cheesy love-triangle. This whole thing strongly shows that Mikasa has always been more than just her Ackerman blood and that Armin is just as important to her, if not more now with their shared secret foresight and devotion to protecting the future, a future they hope they can have together. Seriously, even if this ends up with a heartbreaking or bittersweet ending (especially with Ymir's curse), this is the Arumika slow burn I've been searching for.

Anyway, now that Bertholdt's titan powers are Armin's again, I wonder how much longer they can keep things a secret. The Survey Corp is already aware of the existence of the colossal titan before Armin stole the power. So if Armin were to shift into titan form in front of the Survey Corp, will they think Armin was the one responsible for the fall of Shiganshina? How would Armin and Mikasa explain and prove his innocence, especially since no one else knows about powers being passed down yet? And what would Eren think of his friends if he discovered what they were truly up to behind closed doors? How could they explain themselves and justify their actions with no way to prove they come from the future? Also, how will this time jump alter some of the future memories Eren has with the attack titan's power? Will he retain his humanity, and could Mikasa and Armin end up losing their humanity instead in his place?

Sorry, I know that was a lot of questions to dump on you all at once. I'm just very interested in this fic and am phenonenally impressed with your talent. Also admire how you planned the change of events in the timeline accordingly. Really excited to see where you take it from here, but I hope that isn't too much pressure. I know that often triggers writers block for many people, and understandably so.

Thank you for sharing your writing, it really shows you've worked hard on it and it's such a pleasure to read! Lookong forward to the next update! Stay safe!
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 29 . 7/3
I just want to know one thing: Will any other characters recall memories that may aid in preventing certain events from repeating or echoing themselves?

Will Erwin or Hannes or even Shadis recall things they didn't know about later on?
Isil'zha BLZ chapter 29 . 7/3
Another great chapter. I was surprised to see Armin acting so rashly, but it does make sense, and it was an interesting character reversal to have Mikasa talk him out of it. It's also neat seeing the lingering effects the old Eren has had on them.

On that note, are you ever going to explain how they traveled back in time, or is it just going to be a "because I said so" kind of thing? I'm fine either way, but my personal theory is that the one who sent them back in time was Eren himself after he gained the full power of the Founding Titan. The way things are going in the manga right now, with the alliance trying to stop Eren, there are really only two possible outcomes. Either the alliance succeeds, which will probably result in Eren's death (and the destruction of Paradis island sooner or later) or the alliance will fail, which will most likely result in Eren killing them all. And while he might be willing to do whatever it takes to ensure the safety of Paradis in both the short and long term, he might not be able to bring himself to kill his two closest friends. So he could instead use the Founding Titan to send them back in time, or to another timeline, where they might be able to find another way to save Paradis. And perhaps he would have removed some of their memories so that the last thing they remembered was their confrontation at the restaurant, as he would rather them remember him as an asshole who was losing his mind rather then the genocidal monster he had become. I don't know, that's just my theory on the matter, maybe you have something better in mind.

I liked the bit with Mina, and I think it's good that she gave Armin some encouragement. Despite their doubts, Mikasa and Armin have done a lot of good and should be proud of themselves. For one, they took down Annie with zero casualties, which is truly impressive when you consider the staggering body count it took to capture her the first time around. Secondly, while Trost did still happen, the casualties were lower then before, in no small part thanks to their actions. And the 57th expedition was also much less of a bloodbath this time around. Ironically having the Armored Titan being the one who went after Eren would have resulted in far fewer casualties. Many Scouts upon seeing it would be like "Oh shit, that's the Armored Titan" and would be extra cautious or just try to avoid it altogether. With Annie's Titan, they didn't know what it was, so they just treated it as an abnormal, which resulted in lots and lots of deaths, many of which likely didn't happen this time around. And once again with Bertolt's Titan, they took him down without incurring any more casualties, which is a huge improvement over what it took to take down the Colossal Titan the first time.

And if you've got the emotional depth of a teaspoon, that's still more then me. I'm pretty good when it comes to overarching storylines, but when it comes to character moments I still struggle. The bits with Hannes were really good, and I doubt I could have pulled them off.

I would say don't take too long with the next chapter, but seeing as that would make me a massive hypocrite I'll just say have a nice day.
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