aw, frick. this is so sad and cute in a way. TT-TT

Damn that was different and sad. So he didn't make it and he's in limbo or somewhere else? I would love a reply if you can.

hey! im back. i don't go by leathal anymore, spelling has improved. this this is still hilarious though. - Delusion Xerox (did i ever review here? yes i did i realized before i finished typing that and now i feel stupid

Oh I was hoping they were both in comas. This was so beautiful. I had tears. :)

QAQ oh, that hurt...

This is beautiful, that’s all I have to say

Add More! What happens? I need to know!

I went to hit next chapter... but there wasnt one

this is sad, scary, and funny, why is it funny? i have a dark sense of humor. im really just thinking about how he didnt go insane from the bordom and loneliness

...Dude that’s eerie.

So you turned my hero into angel beats interesting idea but I don't think they mesh well. It was well written regardless. You've got a knack for writing one shots but I'd like to see you try an ongoing story.

This was a nice read, and it has me hooked on. I understand that this is only a one-shot, but if the story gets popular enough, do you think you could do more?

So Deku killed himself in middle school and is trapped in purgatory? Woah that's some heavy shit. I love it

One more was my heart pierced by your unique brand of agony. I'm glad you're still on board this journey called writing, I dearly missed your work. But is everything okay? Nothing to serious is going on yeah? If there is though, I'll be cheering you on in my part of the world. You have my full support.
So Until Next Time, T1.

this is got a good amount tears from me once i realized the symbolism (what i assume it means) in the story. the red line represents ochaco's pulse and the hospital is the pathway between life and the afterlife. Deku doesn't have the red line because he died, but he is so heroic and caring that he still help others find their way back to their life. and i am pretty sure that the fact that all the clocks rewind to just past three is because that is when Deku supposedly died. the fact that the last thing ochaco remembers is the USJ attack also attributes to the theory that it represents the bridge between life and the afterlife. this is very well written and i hope that the assumptions i made are correct.