Wow, Ned's a dumbass. Taking the word of a southerner, plus the leader of a faith the north doesn't mainly follow. Plus Rickard never approved the match, wont be surprised if the northern lords call Cregan a Snow.

kind of good, keep me update

who da fuck are those poeple

hope to see more

super cool. i hope to see more updates

hilarious. cool. especially the free family pack!

it was going good till you added your Oc Kingdom.

Dropped because of chapter 6

Man somehow you suddenly invested with this strangers and want to avenge their misfortune when you only meet them a week ago is this what you do in real life too?. And I thought this is Self Insert.

por favor continua me gusta la historia

Not particularly interested in the accuracy of Valyrian or other fantasy languages. You could just pick a specific font to represent them if they do not have a significant impact on your story. Nice chapter.

splendid

This whole OC Kingdom plot is terrible

Interesting... I have some guesses about who the Valyrian was and when and where they came from. I can also guess that there might have been some influences from the Elissa Farman and Aerea Targaryen journeys. Viserys helping them out and finally getting answers as to what is west of Westeros and the Summer Islands will be interesting. He could also take this as an opportunity to make some money in trade as well as have potential new allies who clearly value Valyrian blood more than Westerosi and Essosi do. The Admiral's surprise at Viserys' looks, language and the other hints suggest a lot.

Damn, I thought Viserys would just copy Dany's ideas of freeing slaves and making them fight willingly for him. So, what will be his reward if he aids them? I don't think they will crown him as their king.