Reviews for Garo No Machi
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24
This is a massive problem with all your stories. Keep to either prose or script to indicate characters speaking. Stop using both. The way you're doing it makes the story very unorganized and near incomprehensible.
Guest DCDGojira chapter 4 . 6/20
To Forge
Awesome chapter!
Guest DCDGojira chapter 3 . 6/13
To Forge
I recommended reading EvaShinobiKaiserKnight's Garo Crossover stories, like Garo Flame Of Gold and Garo Conquest of the Makai. They are really good.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
This story still need some work.
Guest DCDGojira chapter 2 . 10/5/2019
To Forge
Awesome!