To be honest the plot is not that bad but there are loopholes in your story. Like, Eric'd house burned down but it wasn't Lucy's fault so why is he chasing her? With his power he could chase someone else. He is so overpowered that makes it unfair. Can't they be protected from Freed's magic and why can't Bixlow see him clearly if he is a soul. Also you made Lucy seem pathetic and I hate that because she is a strong girl with guts and smartness. Now she is sitting in a place crying of fear and begging so everyone can be safe. However I liked Laxus' stance on Lucy

I really like how you finished this! I enjoyed getting to read this. i Definitely wouldn’t mind an epilogue of where Laxus and Lucy are at in their relationship once everything has settled:)

Man this was a roller coaster. Each time you thought it was over you'd send us for another loop. I would love to see your take on a BixLu ship.

I’m so anxious for the rest of this story! It’s so unique, I love it!

Eek!

Wowzers! I finally had a chance to catch up! Things got pretty crazy here. Good thing they have an ace in the hole with Bixy being able to see him! Can’t wait for more! Xoxo

Keep going pls omg

Yay! A lot to digest in this chappy! Xoxo

Squeeeeeeeeee! I love cute, blushing Laxus! Xoxo

Damn! Another intense cliffy!

Wow! This is getting pretty intense!

Gotta love Laxy butt’s instincts! Yay! Xoxo

Getting super mysterious. I’m hooked! I can’t wait for more!

Looking forward to more

An interesting take on this type of story. I can’t wait to see where it goes. Xoxo