| Reviews for The Blue Faction: Apocrypha |
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   Kurokawa Uzuna chapter 1 . 11/17/2019 waitin' for next chapta' |
| REX3810 chapter 1 . 10/13/2019 It looks very interesting. continue patner. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Amazing |
| Spacecore94 chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 You have my attention |
| Ryner510 chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 Arjuna as a servant for Rin? Now that is a interesting choice. Especially if he is gonna meet and battle with Karna |
| shadow wolf125767 chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 You are goig to have a long road ahead of you. Anyways here are some of my thoughts. You should have or go into more depth on Naruto relationship with Joan, maybe even explain his relationship with Luvia. This is only the first chapter, but i think you can improve. |
| T-B-R chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 Seems a bit rushed but Im excited for another chapter |
| Tabris the 17th Angel chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 Pretty interesting so far, was also surprised of the way you had naruto connect to the counter force. Glad to see its connected to apocrypha, still haven't finished it but I somewhat know what's what. Can't wait for the next chapter |
