| Reviews for The gamer of the CIS |
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JoranTheSwift chapter 2 . 21h Stopped here, reading this is starting to give me an aneurysm, a lot of spelling errors and sentences that don't make a lot of sense |
Guest chapter 5 . 22h The new coglomerate |
Doruk Cider chapter 5 . 7/28 I think a mix between the Terran republic and new conglomerate. The color and the ideals of Terran are better suited for war and industry but the tank schemes and destroy nfantry armor for New Cong. is better. Although there are exceptions such as the pilots of the TS |
Silverscale chapter 5 . 7/28 The Terran Republic sounds fun, it is both nice to say and gives the middle finger to the republic by saying you will make your own, and far greater, republic. |
dupuymathieu chapter 5 . 7/28 choice 3 for me |
revinc chapter 5 . 7/28 choix 1 |
deismos chapter 1 . 7/27 Terran republic sounds interesting |
Jack Redhawke chapter 1 . 7/27 Lot of grammar mistakes and sentences that don’t make sense here, might wanna read over this carefully and proofread a bit more |
lx90 chapter 5 . 7/27 TR |
TheKingOfTheMotorMouth's chapter 5 . 7/27 Bro I think you should try and get a beta or try and reread your stuff before you post, I think this story has a lot of potential but I think you do need help with it! also if you want some inspiration that isn't just from the gamer comic I suggest the legendary moonlight sculptor, and solo leveling, they're pretty damn good. |
Cam.Katarn chapter 5 . 7/27 I think the Terran republic armor would make the most sense and looks the best. Its different enough not to be mistaken as Clone or Republic armor but it still looks like something people from star wars would wear. |
ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 5 . 7/27 Terran Republic i guess? Not sure why you didn't just make a poll on your profile instead of doing it this way |
King dearth chapter 5 . 7/27 The Terran Republic I pick if it matters at all would look good |
bruto chapter 5 . 7/27 New conglomerate |
Samthman chapter 5 . 7/27 Terran |