Is Jaune as tall as Sorceress?

Hope update this story love continue read this story

I get you pretty much brought Virna in for humour but, has an annoying character ever really been funny, I always thought an annoying character was just that, annoying.

But I do agree with what you said about Naruto, I use to read some Naruto fics years ago and god were they all awful, like take this fic and swap Jaune with Naruto, you will get all females being useless drooling brainless bimbos who only care about getting in Naruto's pants and making him love them and nothing else, they will all be useless in the fights because Naruto would one hit everything with his OPness, all while all the females will just drool while saying how hot and cool he is, all the evil females will turn good for a chance of that Naruto dick. Every male even the ones that have been kind friendly and helpful in this, will all be mean abusive sexist rapist etc, because no one but Naruto is allowed to be a decent male, oh and throw in an over the top tragic backstory for Naruto all while the song I feel like a monster plays in the background, to make Naruto seem like a really deep tragic character and make everyone feel sad and sorry for him, and to make all the females want his dick even more.

Really sorry for the long rant, but Naruto really is some cringey shit and most Naruto fics are just terrible, also I don't care what anyone says, Naruto is not an underdog, Lee is an underdog, Jaune is an underdog, Naruto who has always had a powerful fox demon living inside him, a fuck ton of chakra and amazing genes, should not count as an underdog.

The fact Atlas or Ironwood lets the only thing keeping their city up is this one relic seems really fucking dumb, like do they not have a back up plan, if the relic ever gets stolen stop working or is need for something important, everyone in Atlas is fucked.

I can find a bunch of art work on Amazon sorceress and Elf, but practically nothing on Anna and Beast master, what I think really sucks, their hot too so I don't get why people won't draw them.

Fantastic work so far, keep it up and stay safe. Btw will you ever update?

Really enjoying this series and your writing is improving as it goes on.

It’d be good to read a bit more from the other character’s POV especially the Dragon’s Crown chars. When Beastmaster and Anna debuted, they got a lot of airtime but the DC chars suffered at appearing almost from the start. After the heroes complete a quest, ot’d Be particularly neat to see ‘A Day In The Life Of Amazon’. The guys report to the Guild as normal and are dismissed to rest until their next mission. Usually we follow Jaune but this time we follow the Amazon
Instead and see what she gets up to, drinking and feasting at the Inn, taking on all challengers at armwrestling, entertaining the locals with feats of strength like lifting anvils or carts or having a tug of war with a horse ... maybe even eventually taking on Jaune’s barbarian mentor as you teased earlier on. What happens if he beats her? Does she fall into a depression or follow him around like a lovesick teenager? Either way, what happens if she decides not to
Go on the next mission and the party nearly fails as a result, and Jaune has to bring her fighting spirit?

Just an idea anyway and I think
You’re doing a fantastic job with this story

Please please update your next chapter

Finished it till the latest chapter... I have to say, I really enjoyed it.
The pacing of the story is good. Jaune's relationship with the rest of his party is evolving at a good pace. And the rest of every thing else is well handled without overwhelming other elements of the story.
The only criticism I can make is the description of the world and things around Jaune. Your writing is a bit too focused on the main characters without any world building. I say this because I have not played Dragons Crown. Perhaps, others who are familiar with the plot or the lore can manage, but for me who is just diving into this fandom today, it all fell a little flat.
Nonetheless, I really enjoyed what I read and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Ciao!

I don’t wanna be obnoxious (and I’m sorry if you already talked about this in one of your other stories) but did you abandon this story?

Dat ass

Do you ever watch queen blade, i think jaune reborn in that world is really fitting

Hey have you watch Mobile Suit Gundam Iron Blooded Orpheus before bro try making a crossover with RWBY, Bleach, Legend Of Zelda, etc. Try thinking about bro and I hope you are doing ok what has been going on nowadays so say safe.

Bruh its been 2 months will u update pls?

Elf is a bit over 100.
Tiki can find hidden items, doors, etc.