Your ideas are so good and unique wow wow wow

RE-READING THIS IT'S SO GOOD

OK I KNOW I KEEP COMMENTING BUT WOW THIS IS SO AMAZING

YESSSS SO GOOD

God I hate that old log! I much prefer Rowlings knocking him off!

What is a discord server?

wooohooooo

great story thank you for sharing your story with me and your other readers
sucky review sorry can never think of what to say .
Onabi Snape

all Lucy had to do was send an owl to Potter to see if he was alive or not

do I smell foreshadowing with the steps

how does one make a portkey in front of everyone else

for that matter I always gathered portkeys were insanely above newt level charm work

dialogue is good

I don't particularly and honestly understand Draco's role and position in this fic. I get it. He's a nice b loke who keeps to himself. But in the end he is another Neville. A character who gets a few lines.

Maybe it's the bee- um I mean Firewhisky speaking but you darn tooting right Harry got 20 points for his good dueling! Those snakes can go and just shove it.

Even though I must wonder though on an honest note why students weren't questioned under Veritsarum or something.

*insert evil Bellatrix laughter*

You know if it was that easy to off Harry Potter why didn't Tom do something like that originally? Loving the second book in the series thus far!