That was amazing, thank you for sharing your work! I couldn’t put it down!

excellent writing. thx for sharing.

I really loved this OS story! The meeting of a glamoured Severus and Hermione on that train was really original, and their instant connection was touching. The way they spent the rest of their summer was so perfect for the both of them. The following year was just as difficult as was imaginable, but being able to reveal himself after her demonstration of love and continued loyalty was heartwarming. I loves reading the rest of the story with their developing need for each other, as well as their commitment solidifying. The wrap-up, including the scene with Severus and Harry, was sweet and full of the feels I needed after the adventure. I am a dedicated SSHG ship fan, and have been for 15 years (yikes, I'm old! lol). Thank you for another favorite to add to my Sevmione collection!

This was an interesting read. I really like how you brought in young Snape.

Amazing fic! Truely! And I just adored the ending! Kudos!

This has to be, by far, one of my favorite SS/HG fanfictions. It wasn't a one-off or PWP. There was so much between them. Even when their passion came to a head, it was wonderfully written and not just smut. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind smut. But this was so much more!

You’re brilliant!

Amazing!

*screaming*
I LOVED EVERY MOMENT OF THIS
*hysterical sobbing*

*fans myself* woo, that ending was unexpectedly sexy

Awww long talks on the train! Sigh... Melty little Hufflepuddle over here. Especially when she gives her righteous speeches about his homelife and her honesty. You have such a way with righteous HG speeches. Shh don't tell your Gryff I said that. Wouldn't want to encourage her too much. lol

Hahaha her hair and wardrobe scene was so relatable. Try on 50 outfits, like none of them, then just go with whatever is there and tell yourself it's fine. Glad she tried out that makeup. Loved what happened from there.

The kissing scenes you write are almost as good as the lemons. We need a name for them... limes? tangelos? Dash-fucking-knows-how-to-snog scenes? Idk, I shall leave naming things to the professionals.

I am going to cry! Ugh the locket! Merlin that was the sweetest.

Damn his self restraint. Damn his morals. They can all go straight to hell along with my hope for a happy ending.

Bahahaha the thought of him preening... he must be hanging with Luci and the blasted peacocks.

Silence is the worst. Gahhh I'm glad she's a Gryff. Slytherin little me would have demanded to stay informed.

Boffing has officially been added to my repertoire of Britisms.

Draco! Why do you lot insist on making my baby dragon cry? Thanks for giving him a friend. He needs one.

Tiny bruise my pale ass Malfoy... an elbow from Granger is going to turn you all shades of blue, purple, and green lol

HE TOOK POINTS FROM SLYTHERIN! OH SHIT JUST GOT REAL... borrows some popcorn from Nyxxi

I love how she can completely, articulately explain herself no matter how disheveled she is. This is a skill I'm taking notes on Ms. Granger.

Ravenclaw facts: You actually can die of a broken heart. There is a whole TED talk about Takisubo heart which is caused by immense grief and can kill you from sadness.

"Drag you back to life and kill you myself." That.

Fucking Harry...

Nitwit pain in the ass Ron...

Aghhghhh the Nagini bit! Pulling on my heartstrings woman.

Harry you are forgiven your previous indescresions.

MalWeasel! Ginco? Whatever it's all love lol

Dawwww... just... so much love and fluff my sparkly heart is exploding.

Cheers to more demon spawn,

Vine

Really enjoyed this! Although it may have been a bit easier to get through if there were a few chapters broken up instead of one long page. Fun story though, interesting concept.

Oh honey, this was completely stunning. The entire thing from beginning to end, I loved it. An amazing addition to the HISS profile and the 100 Title Challenge. I'm so glad I came up with this title now.

The opening was beautifully descriptive; Hermione's loneliness forcing her onto the underground to do what I do when I'm bored - seek solitude and music. The introduction of Cassian was fun - I'm curious where you came up with the name - I'm imagining it's the name of his maternal grandmother or something. Adding the Journey song made me giggle; it's one of my favourites so i I felt quite the kismet with this story when I heard that line... and paused reading to listen to it on youtube.

Her reaction his knowing who she is was perfect and his subsequent calming her down. I think I'd have pulled my wand faster than breathing too. I noticed that technically, until her name was mentioned this could have been a not-HP-fic at all. Even after, other characters could be called Hermione. You never mentioned Hogwarts, just 'that damn school' and as I was reading that stayed in my mind. Are you practising to publish something other than FF?

The summer was adorable in it's entirely and Snape's reserve in taking the final step of intimacy with her was very sweet. It made me 'awwwww'. I completely adored the necklace idea - it was sweet and set up the reveal of his identity softly. I wonder if deep down she considered it to be him even then. I mean I think I'd recognise most of my old teachers as teenagers even now and he was quite a prominent and imposing figure in her school life.

Their goodbye had me in floods of tears and then the waiting kept them going. Even with the little dramione cameo, I was shouting at the screen... "No! Hermione, no! Not him, it's not him." I got so engrossed in the story it was like when I'm really into a TV show and advising characters who can't hear me to do something different.

Severus's anger when Draco kissed her, and the reveal... oh my God he was so mean before the confession of him being Cassian, I really could've slapped him for that. I was screaming at the screen again... "She loves you Severus. She's been waiting for you. Tell her! Tell her! Tell her!" It was so lovely when he did and that dawning moment in Hermione's mind, I actually felt it.

I loved the flitting through important scenes of the Deathly Hallows and the scene of their first love making encounter. I love how much he loved her in that moment and how she was right there with him the whole time. It really was a very powerful lemon - I bow to your lemons.

Having Hermione take Nagini for him was fantastic, I think we discussed something similar a while ago, is that when you added that in? It worked so well and the little cabin in Ireland... I want one of those... a little Snape-y love nest. His care for her was heart-warming though and I loved it - made me want to give him a big hug (and grope his bum in the process).

And Oh my God, the pregnancy... I was in shock. You gave me babies... big, happy smiley face.

Harry's acceptance brought a tear to my eye and his brotherly interrogation was adorable. He's sort of the reason I wish I had a brother-type person. Even the Draco/Ginny thing he took on the chin like an all-grown-up boy-who-lived.

I've skated over a few things as I don't want to run out of characters to type with but the "Demon Spawn" line at the end and the "Do you submit?" gave me shivers. And her response had the last tear this fic is going to give me fall down my face.

'O' for Outstanding creative writing and 24,181 points to Slytherin - one for every word.

Love and Sevione 4EVA Blessings (Even though he's really mine! Ssshhh, don't tell Mione).
Moon Out x

OMG! This was SO GOOD! I almost didn't read it, and I am so glad I did so now. The younger Snape threw me off a bit and the timing confused me since it mentioned 6th year stuff but they were just going to start it, however, I threw that to the wind, and enjoyed the rest of it. That Draco and Hermione moment did give me a little panic attack though lol

You could never let us down my Darling Dash.
5?! *cough* overachiever *cough*
Alright. I'm going in.
I'll Follow You Down is such a good one. Man...I'm already catching feels and we just started.
Woman! The description of his eyes and all that is in them. Oof. This fic is going to kill me, isn't it?
Gah Dash! Her 'I like you Cassian' speech has me melting. Your little speeches always do.
I have gotten so caught up in reading this but I have to take a moment to tell you that the thought of him preening like a bird is one of the most adorable things I have ever encountered.
Her embrace to Draco! Isn't that we all wanted to do at that moment. Poor baby. My chest hurts all over again. And...uh oh jealousy!
Dash! You're making D and HG adorable and I know this isn't where this story is going. How dare you. Stop playing with my emotions woman and give me a Dramione.
Dammit, Dash! You've made me cry! The words he yells at her. ouch ouch ouch
Damn HG! That kiss took some major guts. Gryff to the core! I'm grinning like an idiot at her speech to him about now running. Your dialogue is always on point!
This lemon! Whew! I'm speechless.
Ahhhhh! I did NOT see that coming!
This Harry! This Harry right here is bae. I love your portrayal of him.
YOU HAD THEM HUG! I'm seriously crying again . Dammit, Dash!
"So you submit?" I am dead. Fainted. Too much. Lort Hammercy.

You took me on an insane emotional rollercoaster but damn if I didn't love every second of it. Brilliant Dash! Just brilliant.

Love and sniffles
Claw Out