I’d love to see conflict with Lila at some point in this plot. Also would love to see Nathaniel and Gorilla make some sort of appearance. :p besides that, I have nothing! This story is adorable and sweet and well done and I’m excited to see where it goes next.

I think it would be interesting to have Lila worked in, in some way.

This is super cool. Can’t wait for more!

Oh! This is really cool! I love this world, and the whole idea of it! I can't wait for more!