Ok, your story is really good and I’m gonna be looking forward to all the coming chapters. Hadn’t read about natural bonds and liked your take on that. However, I feel sometimes lost in your writing, as if I’m missing some dialogues or words. Apart from that, great story all in all.

I'm really enjoying this! I love seeing the events unfolding from both Adrian's and Hermione's perspectives and how they handle it all. I really like Adrian's parents, esp his mother. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens now that Voldemort is back!

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

Another story you have enthralled me with! Can’t wait for more updates!

A few chapters ago you mentioned a Beta...other than a few spelling errors and typos I don’t feel you NEED one. If you ever want someone to proof for you send me a PM. I have little to do other than watch my two boys and since I’m putting off writing my self right now I would love to help.

Can't wait to see what happens next, since Sirius is not likely to join the Order, so Grimmauld Place can be the headquarters of this new band of misfits :) Also looking forward to Harry being rescued by them and hopefully his compulsions lifted. Would also love for Flint to tutor Hermione (and maybe Harry) in Occlumency (don't think Adrian would be a good choice cause of the bond); Cinthya may be a good choice but Marcus would be at Hogwarts too, so easier. And I'm interested to see how Nathan Pucey's role plays out now that Voldemort is back. Anyway, love the story and how Adrian and Marcus's friendship shows in this chapter, as well as their commitment to supporting each other through the tough times to come.

Loved the chapter love the story thank you for sharing

I love how sweet their relationship is, and I like how Marcus is with Adrian

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

Excellent

I still feel bad that Cedric died. Are you going to keep all the death the same or are you are going to change some? I love Marc and Adrian friendship. I love how you are writing Hermione and Adrian's relationship. Great Chapter!
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First read the chapters you have up for this story a few days ago, and just read the whole thing again today, and I am so excited to see where this goes! Particularly can't wait to see more of Sirius and Cynthia, as I feel like they can do such a great job in guiding the kids. Also, love Adrian and Hermione together... . Also would like to see Harry and Marcus interact with them as a couple, or at least Harry's reaction to Adrian taking into account the fact that he knows Adrian is great for Hermione. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

I am so worried how the third task is going to go. Are you going to change it or keep it the same? I am worried for Adrian and Hermonie. I love how you are writing their relationship.

What a lovely chapter so nice

I’m so glad you updated this wonderful story, it’s very sweet and thoughtfully written I had to go back and reread it and truly enjoyed it all over again and can’t wait to see where you take it

This story is so sweet, I love it