Reviews for Focused
Pbeth4eva chapter 18 . 5/2
Bruh r u not gonna update anymore or something
Guest chapter 18 . 4/28
Please update soon'
AsterTenebrosity chapter 18 . 4/27
so good! I absolutely adore this fanfiction, your writing is so good!
ashcarr101 chapter 18 . 4/21
AWESOME story! Keep it going.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/11
I like the introduction of Rachel, I wasn’t expecting that
EZmice chapter 18 . 4/11
Percy and Rachel endgame seems more appealing than percabeth in this story tbh
animission chapter 1 . 4/11
further bottom comment: Percy doesn't hit people because he knows how it feels to be hit, so I don't believe he would use Rachel to get to Annabeth. I see him slowly forgetting about Annabeth romantically while being with Rachel, they go to college/uni... and yadda yadda. Slow burn at great lengths.
animission chapter 18 . 4/11
I'm slightly hoping Percy and Rachel try a relationship, but both agree to be friends in the end. no using. no cheating. I don't want a further domino effect of using to make someone jealous. Once was enough, and I don't want Percy to do something that was done to him.
IndominusRex.Velociraptor chapter 18 . 4/11
PERCY FORGET ANNABETH ASS!
SHE USED YOU
I LOVE PERCABETH BUT IN THIS STORY ANNABETH DOESNT DESERVE PERCY
RandomFanAuthor chapter 18 . 4/11
God, my heart was beating so fast during this. Jeez. It was very well written. Nice job.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/6
Ugghhhh why annabeth why?! You're one of the few good writers here at moment and thank you for bringing in good quality percabeth stories tho i hope you'll update sooner! No pressure tho. Keep it up! :)
MotherOfFandoms chapter 17 . 4/7
Annabeth is so disrespectful omg. Percy needs to give her a hard time... she can’t get it easy like that.
MotherOfFandoms chapter 11 . 4/7
The audacity Annabeth has asking Percy to be her f*ck buddy. I love this story lmao.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/5
Love, love, love the angst in this chapter
Guest chapter 17 . 4/4
hoping percy doesn’t take annabeth back right away
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