| Reviews for Focused |
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Pbeth4eva chapter 18 . 5/2 Bruh r u not gonna update anymore or something |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/28 Please update soon' |
AsterTenebrosity chapter 18 . 4/27 so good! I absolutely adore this fanfiction, your writing is so good! |
ashcarr101 chapter 18 . 4/21 AWESOME story! Keep it going. |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/11 I like the introduction of Rachel, I wasn’t expecting that |
EZmice chapter 18 . 4/11 Percy and Rachel endgame seems more appealing than percabeth in this story tbh |
animission chapter 1 . 4/11 further bottom comment: Percy doesn't hit people because he knows how it feels to be hit, so I don't believe he would use Rachel to get to Annabeth. I see him slowly forgetting about Annabeth romantically while being with Rachel, they go to college/uni... and yadda yadda. Slow burn at great lengths. |
animission chapter 18 . 4/11 I'm slightly hoping Percy and Rachel try a relationship, but both agree to be friends in the end. no using. no cheating. I don't want a further domino effect of using to make someone jealous. Once was enough, and I don't want Percy to do something that was done to him. |
IndominusRex.Velociraptor chapter 18 . 4/11 PERCY FORGET ANNABETH ASS! SHE USED YOU I LOVE PERCABETH BUT IN THIS STORY ANNABETH DOESNT DESERVE PERCY |
RandomFanAuthor chapter 18 . 4/11 God, my heart was beating so fast during this. Jeez. It was very well written. Nice job. |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/6 Ugghhhh why annabeth why?! You're one of the few good writers here at moment and thank you for bringing in good quality percabeth stories tho i hope you'll update sooner! No pressure tho. Keep it up! :) |
MotherOfFandoms chapter 17 . 4/7 Annabeth is so disrespectful omg. Percy needs to give her a hard time... she can’t get it easy like that. |
MotherOfFandoms chapter 11 . 4/7 The audacity Annabeth has asking Percy to be her f*ck buddy. I love this story lmao. |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/5 Love, love, love the angst in this chapter |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/4 hoping percy doesn’t take annabeth back right away |