Man, this has been quite a ride, huh? You're very welcome, alright. Also, Margaret's gonna be hanging out with Elizabeth more, huh? I feel bad for them and their other siblings, though. And I don't know if I'll be reading the rewrite anytime soon, considering my daily life and shifting interests, but I am quite fascinated by that sequel hook! Especially with how you worked up Masquerade, Nyarlathotep, Nanako, Ikutsuki, and probably Takuto as well! It also makes me wonder about how Sho and Labrys would come into play here. Anyway, apologies for this very late review, and I wish you more strength and worthwhile times! Keep up the good work, man!

wow this guy just casually plan to make nanako cook for his guest

Fuk

the first time Namatame did
[thing?]

Chapter 2
planned how how to tell him
[-how]

I even edit fiction for a literary magazine
[Do you find this ever dissuades you from writing your own stories? I’ve known cooks and editors who say they don’t like doing the topic in their free time anymore]

Chapter 4
suit better than Adachi ever thought
[Not sure if you meant ‘bought’, but this sentence feels off]

you have to be there for this kid. He's most likely never had a good father figure in his life
[And Adachi’s going to be a good father figure? How does Dojima even know his adoptive mother wasn’t married?]

why should I even bother?"
[He’s bothering to bring up the conversation. As blunt as you’re saying Dojima is, I’m surprised he doesn’t say that]

Chapter 5
I've gotten so used to being called Mishima
[It’s not like it’s a nickname, it’s his family name and that’s the formal reference most Japanese use until they’re close enough to be friends]

The idea of this link between P4 and P5 is unique, but I feel like you're throwing in wild character changes without either justifying them or a need within the context of this story. I understand some of Yuuki's name identity crisis even if it seems strange since he still has the same identity he spent the last decade and a half building, but the others make less sense and don't seem to have a reason either from their canon base or anything justified in a split from that within this story universe.

What

Oh wow, I can feel a lot of Lelouch on this one. And I guess you've managed to connect Nyarly and the P5 Royal additions as well, huh? And is the Wild Card who died in SEES Minako/Hamuko and not Minato/Makoto? Is Minato/Makoto alive here, then, much like an Arisato Siblings AU setup? And man, talk about some Xanatos Gambit work. The world's still gonna get wrecked bigtime by Tohru whether it goes according to the original plan or not...and man, not bad with all those zoomed-out perspectives. I can feel the heavy tension!

You know, honestly, I think I would've been more horrified if this happened without the whole Kido dad background behind Akira. He'd look a lot more like Tohru that way, and he could still maintain that mysterious and hiding unkempt beauty aura. Still, that confrontation was interestingly horrifying, and it's giving me some more motivation to, at least, continue to write down ideas for a horrifyingly ridiculous Persona 5 fanfic, one way longer and crazier than "Real Treasures Returned." Suddenly, I think I understand Tohru's understanding of Yu some more, hahaha! That aside, I guess they'll figure out Yaldy's meddling sometime soon? Oh, and I wonder how Yukitaro's gonna gather up public support later on as a Phantom Thief with a chance of...you know? But I guess that's where Tohru also comes in, yeah?

Huh, Goro's now Naked Snake or something, then? Wait, no, he's now Mike Wazowski! Somebody give him a mic for his every appearance from now on! XD

Joking aside, you have made me feel like I haven't read enough fanfics about Tohru, hahaha! And Shido's going that far as well...The best is still yet to come, yeah?

Someone is pissed. Bit confusing as to who isn't these days but it is someone

Things are going a bit too easy, alright...so I'm betting that the explosion to look forward to will happen when the calling card's sent. I don't think Tohru's support there would be able to push through without any bigger reaction from the bigger boss in this, y'know?

Should I be reading the part with Dojima with "A Cruel Angel's Thesis" in mind? I first thought that it was "Ai wo Torimodose," though, hahaha! Anyway, I'm feeling all fuzzy with this one~ And hey, Happy Birthday!

Good luck on your midterms, and advance Happy Birthday greetings to you! Also, you're very welcome, and I'm glad to have been of service! Anyway, seeing this father-son bonding reminds me of sweet Ryotaro and Nanako, though maybe that's just my fresh gaming experiences with Persona 4 talking, hahaha~ Though speaking of fresh experiences, has anyone ever asked you to reference Hiimdaisy? 'Cause I feel like doing so, especially considering how goofy Tohru can get here~ Specifically: "Who wants to talk about MURDERS?" and "Daddy's got some...criminals to apprehend..."

Boy, did I find this chapter's Tohru vs Goro cackleworthy! Also, Reiji Kido is Akira's dad here, then, huh? Wait, who's the mother? Anyway, I'm guessing that Tohru will one-up Goro's Shido humiliation plot enough to kick Yaldy's ass and change the cognition of Tokyo. With the escalation up this far, I'm betting that it'll go that crazier. So yeah.

I grinned at Yukitaro looking at the Palace and dealing with Goro, and then my jaw dropped at how Tohru dealt with Sae's Palace and Sae in reality. Nice to way to remind readers about how the basics of manifesting a Ruler's Treasure is to pretty much make the Ruler feel threatened in reality about their deep dark secrets being revealed, too. Now, the next part should be Akira getting arrested thanks to Goro, but I wonder what's gonna happen here instead...? Oh wait, Goro probably didn't expect this heist to be finished so quickly, so I guess next up is Tohru flexing right in front of his fellow edgelord.

if mishima got a persona, he'll definitely be stronger than joker since joker is a pussy