nice chapter, good to see your keeping the story alive

I love this chapter so much. It was a really good read and it made my day when I'd seen that you updated the story. You are awesome!

The slow burn is consuming me

oh I love this story

Like the story so far. keep up the good work!

and "back to school" is hurting me as well no more freetime :(

but keep up the good work and love the story so far!

"Ketu's desk was almost like a shrine. A shrine to his boyhood aspirations that never came to be."

Oh God, that sentence! It touched a sensible fiber and I really hurt to me but...

Your story is amazing and I love Ketu so much! You are a fantastic writer and I'll be awaiting the next chapter!

I'm really enjoying this and hope to see more soon.

figures

What a very interesting story, I manly like how the oc actually dose stuff or changes certain things, definitely very interesting

Fantastic story! My god I've binged this all in one day because it was just that good! Your writing of Ketu is really good. I love him as a character and the drama between his and Korra's relationship is really good. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. So far it is amazing!

awesome story so far! pls update soon

when will we have a new chapter?

This is a great story hope you keep writing it in your spare time

Father! I had a feeling that ketu was tenzins son but thought maybe they just had an argument.

Really good so far

Ug- Y E S. Love me some linzin kids, & one that actually has an emotive back story is just extra vanilla in the cake. Excited to see how you proceed! :)