Good stuff. I decided to do some reading during my break, and while I'm not the most invested in romance or couples, this was seamless, mostly due to your immaculate style and masterful flow with writing. Colour me impressed.

While there were a few parts where the rambles did overstay their welcome, you make very quick recovery. Nothing was immersion-breaking.

Overall, this is a fun piece for a quick, light-hearted read. Very nice contrast to my current fic, of course. Keep putting out stuff like this, it's enjoyable

~ Ace

Aforementioned "silliness" aside, I think that this was a really nice story that fleshed out Hilda and the time between Black/White and their respective sequels. A lot of people imagine the characters they are writing about saving the world, but very few ask the question "what comes next?", and I think you did a remarkable job of conveying a mixture of the pressure that comes from potentially "peaking" as a hero during your adolescent years and the optimism of moving forward, making a new friend, and taking the first steps towards living something resembling a normal life, all in your very compelling rendition of Hilda's voice.

Thank you for writing this!

This is so well written! I really enjoyed this one chapter and I'm impressed by how much characterization you put into Hilda and N. (N's characterization of him being a prick is hilarious!). I'm interested to see how this plays out between Hilda and Rosa.

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