Moar? MOAAAAAR.

Hello there,

I've read the first two chapters of this little gem and I wanted to give you some praise.

First of, the writing is excellent in my opinion. You employ a rich vocabulary without making the text overcomplicated. Which results in nice, punchy descriptions: with a few words, you immerse the reader in your world.

Secondly, I've been reading this story with a halfsmile chiseled on my face. The puns and jokes (Emper-O's (ha!)) are very funny, not to mention the recognizable archetyped characters that are to accompany commissar Reiner on his mission. I suppose some people will find it inappropriate to use the warhammer 40k setting so whimsically, but I for one am digging it.

So, I hope you don't run into too much distractions as you're writing this. Any delay seems highly heretical.

Kudos!

I fucking loved Death of a Guardsman, I hope this is just as good.

Good god this thing was a treasure. It was funny throughout and the magos part in particular had me laughing so hard i had to take a timeout and calm down before i could continue reading.

Looking forward to the next chapter with great expectations! :D

This story is set up like a heist flick! Damn funny and very refreshing! Re-reading the story again to get more details in. :D Please keep on going. :D