Ha I suspected it from the beginning that Percy was her husband. Your stories never disappoint.

I couldn't stop laughing!

this was actually funny

i liked it

10/10 I can't stop laughing. this is such a quality trope I can't get over it! 333

I love this! It’s my favourite PJO/HOO one shot and I’ve already read it twice!

I literally knew from the beginning lol

I knew it was Percy. Great story.

Amazing. Unbelievably brilliant. How are these endings weird? Gah this was so good I didn't even guess the twist (well, until when they went to her home)! But not the rhubarb pie, haha, that was the real shock. It all makes sense now. I don't know what kind of miracles Percy performed that Annabeth had no idea, but of course he managed it, and it's true, she probably wouldn't act affectionate around him, and that's exactly the conversation they would have about their cat's name. I love how you always take such a unique spin on everyone's personalities and it's just hilarious and great and it's fine if there's not a lot of Percabeth, I still enjoyed it a ton! Jasper is also beautiful ;). Sorry this was so random, I can't come up with anything coherent. And Paper Rings? Yes! YES! I was also struck when I heard invisible strings from folklore, like I can't even describe anything, but that song is incredible. Thanks for posting!

oh this fic was hilarious

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I sort of knew already that Percy would be Annabeth's husband, but it was awesome. Also, HOW UNFAIR IS IT THAT YOU ALL GET TO CELEBRATE STUFF LIKE THANKSGIVING AND CHRISTMAS AND HALLOWEEN!
Still, I adored the story
*J'adore*
*Chef's kiss*
*PERCABETH FOR EFFING LYF*

Dudeeee it’s really the biggest revelation since earth Vader. But I was sensing it bro. And I liked it just the thought of Percabeth married feels good

Haha, never expected Percy to be her husband of all the people. It was a good twist!

Hello! I posted this on AO3 originally but i’ve just discovered you have an account here where ur more active and so i thought i’d copy/paste since i just love this story so so much. I don’t really use this site much tho so idk if the fancy html text will show up in this review so apologies if it doesn’t and i hope it’s not in the way too much if that’s the case haha. Anyway here’s my review!
pWOW this is so well written I don’t even know where to begin! Like everything from the plot to the characterization to the chemistry to the dialogue is just...utterly immaculate. And not only do I love with this story, I fell in love with the writing: the tone matches the story so perfectly and I genuinely laughed several times. It’s so hard to create good chemistry between characters in writing, but you’ve done it so well with everyone in this story. Take Jason’s conversation with Piper in the scene where he gives her the cookies, for example: it’s one thing to simply write “It’s effortless talking to her.” (which you do), but the whole scene iactually makes it believable because you write such well-crafted dialogue/i, and that’s what makes this piece so hall-of-fame-worthy. And then to top it off, it builds to the line “I can name at least ten people who would throw hydrochloric acid at Octavian.” I DIED!br /
The characters’ relationships, interactions, and reactions to each other are genuinely believable in this fic and that is so so rare. And the overall tone! LOVED! It reads almost like a sitcom, but somehow without the feeling of mining for laughs. fucking awesome. It’s really those simple, yetperfectly selected, phrases in the writing that take this the extra ten miles, to the point where it genuinely feels like I, as the reader, can not only grasp iexactly/i how the scene played out in your head before you wrote it down, but I can see it clearly through Jason’s eyes—and I love it. Here are some noteworthy examples (honestly though, there are so many more)/p

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p The problem! Jason flails. /p/blockquoteThis is so in character for the Jason you’ve written (bc let’s be honest, canon Jason doesn’t have much personality...), and I can discern exactly how he’s feeling in this moment, and literally picture his face as he reacts.

p “Excuse me,” Octavian says, drifting up to them like a ghost. /p/blockquoteThis leads to an utterly hilarious scene, and the description attached to Octavian’s entrance is specific but bon point./b Yet another flawless word choice.

p “Are you divorcing?” Leo says, ever tactful. /p/blockquoteThis is peak comedic irony! I love how it subtly fits in with the general embarrassed-ness (mortification?) that Jason’s feeling about his coworkers. Plus, the concision of this entire 3-line scene just makes it that much more powerful: it’s straight to the point, funny, and purposeful. 10/10.

pLast thing, to top it all off: the group dynamic! This is why I said it reads almost like a sitcom: every character has such a niche and fleshed-out personality (except Jason, Piper, and Percy to a certain degree), to the point of being unrealistic—but this is great—it makes the lightness of the story work, because the story is inot real!/i It’s hilarious and awesome and I’m so glad you wrote it the way you did because it’s so much better than it would’ve been if you’d tried to “normalize” the characters and make people like Leo or even Grover more relatable. Some examples, because I can’t help myself:br /
- The entire briefing room scene feat. Grover’s environment board. The main focus (mirrored by Jason) is on Octavian’s printing habits, but even as Thalia and Octavian face off, and Annabeth intervenes, some characters are caught up in their own side-distractions: Grover’s distraught about his environment board, Percy’s turned on by Annabeth, Clarisse just wants everyone to calm the fuck down. /
- The scene where they’re all giving thanks around the dinner table. This was such a clever way to essentially provide 1-line characterizations of the entire group, and I love how I was able to tell who was speaking without any dialogue tags! 10/10./p

I love thissss

Wonderful!