Quéééé?...
Noooo, no merede terminar así.
Ya está terminado?, no decía que era el fin... Pero hace mucho que fué publicado.
Quien iba a pensar que Harry se haya hecho amigo de Draco.
Pobre Harry... Nadie elige de quien enamorarse, solo pasa y ya.
Si estás enamorado y te enamoras de otra persona, debes elegir a la segunda, ya que si amaras a la primera jamás te hubieras enamorado de la segunda.

Se felíz siempre.

Woaaa y pensé que ésta historia había terminado... Pero faltaba el punto de vista de Harry!
Ahora sabré por qué era la llamada de emergencia.
Sé felíz siempre!

As ever, you right cracking stories, and this and it's previous 'part 1' other story are excellent. Following your writings is a pleasure. Well done

Regards DG Fogg (It's David, really!)

Great story plot!

In this entire ff this greengrass is coming a accross cunning and manipulate bitch who can even sell her body to get what she wants basically a whore. If I was harry I would rather work with my relationship with ginny rather with this manipulative bitch.

A most intriguing start to this story. I can hardly wait for the next episode.

wow this great please write more

Great story!

Another great story, can't Waite for more.

- Merlin, what was I supposed to do?
Grow a pair and stop apologizing for everything and anything?

To much "Huh?"s, heating necks and defensiveness for my liking. Harry is too pansy here. Why?

It's interesting to see Harry's thoughts and perspective. It's strange that you've already written the conclusion :-(
I'm looking forward to getting into that time/head-space where you have not already covered things.

Hopefully you will take the following as the constructive criticism it is meant to be.

I'm really disappointed that I read these out of order. I looked through the story descriptions and then decided which one to read based on the order. Since this is your most recently posted, I thought for sure that it would be the one that came last... Could you please adjust their descriptions, maybe something so simple as first in the series, second in the series, third in the series for instance?

As to the content of this chapter, I felt that it is largely rehashed information after having read the prequel.
You could take out a lot of the shared dialogue and simply show Harry's point of view on some of the key moments, perhaps combining it into a single chapter story.

I sure hope he will dump the weasellette.
They allways say that the grass is greener on the other side of the fence.
Please, do not stop here.

I have read all three of this trilogy, and thoroughly enjoyed them. You have a lot of creativity and imagination. Well done. A few minor spelling/language errors, but not too significant. Again, well done. Please finish this part of the series, it has intrigued me.