Meh

I really hope you continue this. This is amazing.

Good chp like it so far

Can’t wait for an update author!

Oh the irony Dumbles

this is awesome fuc. I love it. I hope Others accept Fleur and Harry's Relationship. I also like Iris X Harry.

10/10 so far

I really truly hope you are still going to have a Hadrian/Fleur pairing and aren't going to make it super angsty if you do with her being put into a betrothal that they end up going against or Hadrian actually has to have conflict with his father about it. I like how you are making him care more about Hadrian as a son, so it would be awesome if you gave him some extra humanity by having him see they would make each other happy and allowing it without it being a huge speed bump in the plot. Right now I think we all could use a little escapism and that would personally be something I would love to see. Now that I got my spiel out there, I am loving the story so far and want to thank you for sharing! I think him being a little OP is perfectly understandable given who he is being trained by and from what age. So I hope you continue to show Hadrian as being extremely talented/powerful. I think showing some more rituals would also be a nice touch and explain where some of his power comes from.

Superb story, more please.

I love.

Cringe.

update soon

I love it Luna knows about he's sister she should tell him by end of this year the Potter Siblings versus the world

It just had to be Hadrian huh... this name is so overused its ridiculous. Also some of the mechanics you are changing that are staple in the HP universe is a bit over the top, like the Basilisk Legilimency. If you look into a basilisks eyes you are dead anyway.

Well this chapter was full of plot holes. I won't greatly expand on them, as I first intended, because it's not worth my time, but I will mention them.

The argument about Lupin is not whether or not a student can stand up to a werewolf. They can't and that's a proven fact. The argument is that he was able to control himself. And that's totally irrelevant to how good of a teacher he was. Obviously he was dangerous to have at a school, but he was still good at teaching defense.

Harry's duel with Hermione was silly. The argument was silly in the first place, but having someone that you have said can rival Grindelwald, Dumbledore, and Voldemort duel a 4th year Hogwarts student is useless. I was surprised that Hermione lasted 3 minutes after Harry started trying though. Obviously that means that despite what Harry has thought to himself, he's nowhere near Grindelwald or Dumbledore. 3 minutes is an extremely long time in a duel. If he couldn't finish it in 1 minute (after he started trying) then I doubt he's even at the level of some 7th year Hogwarts students.

Why would Harry care about he dragons? Isn't he Grindewald's son in this story? Yet he's scared of a dragon? Did he really think the organizers would have taken all the danger out of the tasks? We can see time and again in canon that due to their healing ability, wizards care a lot less about safety.

So the reason Harry can kill Luna is because every spell that he knows that could kill someone would be detected by Dumbledore? Did Harry take some dark wizards oath that requires him to only kill with awesome and powerful dark spells? Did he never learn a basic cutting charm or how to conjure a knife?

I like the story, but the plot devices you use to put it together aren't the best. Honestly, they're pretty illogical. They're worse than canon.