Brilliant I hope you plan on continuing this story.

Good.
Great even.
You should definitely continue this fic. Post the rest of it or at least update it. It's a pretty good story. But you haven't updated this fic in SO LONG. please post more soon!

this is really good! its an interesting set up for a crossover. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Best of luck with your studies! :)

This fic is fantastically interesting! I'm loving it so far, and the little tweaks you've done to the story so far are really neat. I loved that it was Harry that was talking to Jon, not Death themselves. Robb's and Sansa's relationship with Jon is just too precious! And the addition of Caspian is awesome. The fact that her prayer to the stranger was caught and told to Eddard is really cool, and I thought that the fallout from that was perfectly in character of Ned. I'm hooked on this! Thanks for writing it! 333

How is this an X-OVER with HP when it's NOT SLASH and HP is not even really IN IT..You're only using the NAME and FANDOM of HP..That's lame!

Using DEATH from the HP world/and it's MAGIC doesn't mean or give you the right to say this is a x-over; when really, HP is not even MOD-DEATH as you said..I've come across author like you..Unless HP has a FREAKING BIG role in this or is paired with Jon or is JON, There is NO HP in this story..

Also, too easy on the ABUSIVE bitch because IT IS ABUSE in CANON! You letting the bitch off that easily says something about you as a person..Disgusting. YOU basically protect her abuse towards a child..What with no consequence's and nobody else knowing.. What a disgusting act on your part also.

Well, your ACT on the bitch isn't as bad as ONE author that had her throw baby FEMALE JON into a fire to kill her but later on acted on NICE and SHIT because Female Jon isn't Eddard and THAT story is THY worst in the FANDOM..Author didn't punishment that VILE/bitch of a women for her actions but REWARDS her! URGH! Your story is basically going the same direction without the PHYSICAL ABUSE/KILLER intent but the end is pretty much the SAME..NO consequence for her actions..Yeah(rolls-eyes) a "talking" too but that's it..HOW pathetic.

Please continue to write this whenever you are able.

This chapter made me cry in a good way, partially for the characters you crafted here and partially for the characters in "Game of Thrones" and its version of her and her inability to love Jon.

Really hope you update this soon. It’s been months and I just finished reading and reviewing when I saw that it was been updated in awhile. Hope everything is good, and that you continue this story

Fantastic so far. First fanfic I’ve read where Catelyn seems to be more complex besides simple hate. Can’t wait for the rest it looks like it will be amazing

Great chapter, waiting for the next one!

Wow! I’m loving this story so far! I really hope you update soon!

This was an amazing chapter, I really enjoy your book. If you have time can you please update?

Yeah the Starks aren't really the rulers of the north we all know that the others are the ones who truly ruled in North the humans there just think they rule things but I suppose nearby to learn that soon enough. As for the wonders of the world the wall doesn't really right at High and you missed a couple of them there's the massive bridge in valentus that was built by the valyrians are bridge so massive that there's actually buildings constructed on the bridge that people live in and places of business brothels and shops and all that and if I remember correctly the entire bridge is made of fused Stone then there's the five Forts of Yi-Ti that is also made of fuse Blackstone and was said to have been created during the Great Empire of the Dawn and they still stand today in perfect condition and every one of the four words are large enough to hold 10,000 men it was said to have been built to defend against the demon sent by the lion of the night during the long night to wipe out Humanity for their cruelty. And of course you have Asshai which the entire city is made of fused oily black stone and the city so old that no one has any written account of when it was created and the city is so large that volantis and King's Landing and a couple other large cities can all perfectly fit in it with room to spare. Of course I could go on about The Many Wonders that Trump the wall nevermind the fact that I highly doubt that the Northerners built the wall quite frankly it makes no sense that they could ever have built such a thing not to mention that they also had no magic in which they could have used to build it so the wall was most likely built either by the others or by the children of the forest or maybe the both of them since the Children of the forest are definitely responsible for the spells on the wall including the Talking weirwood Tree door that's in the nightfort. And as for the whole starts legendary honor there is no such thing quite frankly so-called honor as never been associated with the start until Eddard Stark and the honor that he learned it did not come from his father or anyone else in the north it came from Jon Arryn after all "as high as honor" is the words of house Arryn. Though I'm definitely biased about this part because honestly I don't like the North it's way too overblown I honestly don't see the attraction to it it's a frozen Wasteland the only thing they truly have is a lot of space and trees that's it the Northerners honestly are of no use in the grand scheme of things and their so-called importance is way overblown plus honestly I look forward to them getting slaughtered by the others because they have it coming for what they did to the children of the forest and the Giants.

Anyway at least Ned somewhat understand what he did and the life he condemned Jon to there was nothing good about it at all and he could not have possibly expected Catelyn to react in any way good to John's presents quite frankly most other Noble women in catlins situation would have had Jon killed long ago let's just get that out of the way very few noblewomen would have been as nice as cat was given the circumstances and even then out of that you most of them would have been that way simply because they would think that they can't actually do anything about his presence.

Quite frankly the whole making Jon his bastard idea was just completely f****** stupid in the first place why in the world didn't he send John to live with Howland Reed in the neck he would have been safer there than anywhere else below the wall in Westeros. And since I'm going to assume that this Caspian fellow is Arthur why not allow him to raise him Dorne? He would have had a vastly better life there. But I suppose Harry is condemned to suffer in either life or perhaps any future life you'll have after this as well and the trend of this suffering happening because some adult who have some connection to him who think he knows best decided to make decisions that negatively impacted his life for years to come.

I meant comment about the seven cursing Catlin for what she prayed for he obviously knows nothing about the religion then they would not curse her they would have gladly except her prior if they are real according to the faith of the seven bastards are pretty much the embodiment of the worst human qualities and they are cursed by the seven.

And honestly Ned amuse me in this chapter when he told Catelyn that she will no longer have his trust which is a load of horse crap she never had his trust to begin with which is why she does not know the truth about Jon.

Any way this chapter was all things said very interesting and I can see the changes happening already and I do look forward to your next chapter.

Very interesting.

For just two chapters you have an amazing start. I hope to see more soon.

Woah... I'd say that Jon has become a bit of a bishounen Gary Stu...

But he WAS gifted by the God of Death to ensure he could fulfill his destiny and save mankind. Soooo, I guess it would be ass-backwards for me to hate the whole point of Death interfering.

And yeah, Catelyn's got some kinda weird crazy thing about bastardy. I never really understood it properly, even in the tv series. I mean, babies don't choose to be born. They just are.