| Reviews for White to Move, Mate in Two |
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   AnFan-n-More chapter 1 . 7/15 Hmmm, wait, no. The Elder wand is now Snape's! It 'was' Harry's, but then Harry was defeated by Tom and sent to talk to Dumbledore. Then Snape did in Tom. I'd say the wand would reject Harry. :) |
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 6/26 great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
| Ano chapter 1 . 6/8 Why can't endings be not overly dramatic like this one. An audience in the final battle always means more casualty. |
| tag0 chapter 1 . 6/1 *snrks* Anti-climatic, possibly, but it would have solved things without the whole misery of deus ex machina! And given Snape more of an important role to play in actually defeating Voldie. I like! |
| Itack23 chapter 1 . 5/13 Hahaha! I can just imagine the expression on Snape's face when Harry just sit back up! An expression that would be saying 'Is this a miracle? Or am I in my worst nightmare?' |
| clover cat Klee chapter 1 . 3/7 aah that endingxDDDD "he killed me, I jut got better" :'D love it! |
| Shian1998 chapter 1 . 1/20 Another great one-shot! Really enjoyed this. Admittedly anticlimactic, but probably more realistic. Much quicker way to end the war, and with a few less lives lost. If only Harry and the other good characters had been a little more willing to use more ruthless and efficient methods like this. Liked that Snape was quick enough to evaluate the situation with the Horcruxes and take the shot at Voldemort while he had the chance. Was amused by his nonchalant Harry was about everything after coming back, and by how this broke Snape's composure. :) |
| Hedwig chapter 1 . 1/10 Haha :-) Nice try, but... -What good is a protective cage if it doesn't protect against the Avada? -Also, what is missing here is that Harry needed to *willingly* die at Voldemort's hand, bc if I understood correctly that is why Voldy hit his own Horcrux instead of Harry himself. After allowing Voldy to murder him, he wouldn't have been beaten, so the Elder Wand would indeed still be his. |
| annasfanfic chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 3 |
| wingedcatgirl chapter 1 . 12/13/2019 This was brilliant. |
| lynxreader chapter 1 . 12/9/2019 ah, this Harry still makes one of Rowling's many mistakes, in losing track of who's defeated whom for that wand. it's Snape's, in this scenario. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 Great |
| Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 11/4/2019 ...I can't BELIEVE I never thought of this. Brilliant. Well-written, too. |
| SeleneBoxer chapter 1 . 10/29/2019 I like this :) |
| Miriam1 chapter 1 . 10/16/2019 That... was actually a very inspired move. No one saw this coming, and it ended the war much more quickly, leaving Severus alive. I like it. Sincerely, Miriam |
