Just posted Chapter 4 right now.

RayD2Kill, you should check my Wattpad. I only have three chapters up but I am working on it. I guarantee you will find the final version to be more than 10 chapters. A crap ton larger than a measly 10 chapters. Maybe something like 100 or maybe even 1000 chapters by the time I am done with it.

It's unfortunate that you stopped updating, it seems whenever I find a fanfic like this one where Ruby is being neglected by nearly everyone around her it only has a few chapters before the author has given up on it. I have not found one single fanfic that has ever exceeded 10 chapters especially one that has been been completed. Unfortunate really, they have a burst of motivation to start it but I guess they don't think it through, maybe it starts to feel like work and they just give up on it.

I hope you get back to this but I'm not going to hold my hopes up that this will ever be finished.

Just posted my second chapter which is technically my "first" chapter seeing how the second chapter is all mine. If you are on Wattpad then look up "Proud American" and look for a picture of an old continental army bluecoat. Or look up any my stories. "130 PyrRuby" and "American Abyssals" and "Ruby Begins".

Just saw your review, NeoiluzaF, and quickly wrote the first chapter of my version. Hope you like the first part.

my. /6itmPizn17

Please keep this up, the drama is so good. Short and sweet, yet drawn out enough for an encore.

My only advice would be to chop up some of your larger paragraphs.

Love this story please update it.

Yo KushMaster make sure u drop a link for that

In response to Kushmaster5000, sure. Go right ahead. I'm interested to see your version of this story. As for when I'll post the next chapter, hopefully soon. Still about half-way done. Currently in a bit of a rut and lacking ideas. To all my readers out there, thanks for your support. Hopefully my next chapter won't take too long.

Hey, I don't know when you will be updating this story but I have a question. I am writing stories on Wattpad and am wondering if I can rewrite this story in my own way? I have a few ideas how to (opinion) make it better. So could I please have your permission? If I do get your permission then be assured that I will give full credit to you as the original author.

wby appolgy to Ruby should be like how Drake appolgy to josh.

Look, I'm just a random guest in a sea of possible random guests here, but I want to say that you did a great job with this concept. It was quick, drawn out long enough, and hit the right places.

I don't really like constructive criticism because it's basically: "Don't do this, do this."

There's going to be people that will criticize the work, but if they didn't do it, then they wouldn't care enough to comment. I believe you're smart enough to understand criticism from a mindless flame, you're going to have to grow a thick skin for when the time comes. So long as the criticism goes in depth and is specific, then there's no need to worry.

Ruby goes to a club and drink wine,beer and whisky and partys all night.

I really like how the story is going so far! Please please PLEASE! continue updating this story. Things have gotten so much more interesting.

When is next chapter?