| Reviews for Lightfall |
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AngelFaux chapter 2 . 4/10 Some politics going on and a disgruntled second prince. As the kingdom prepares for war tension is high and morale low. It may be too early to say fully but Belaset's an selfish arrogant glory hound. I don't like him as a person but he's definitely interesting as a character. The little bits like Noivern trainers and their hearing problems or the small uses of Avini'a psychic power and the integration of pokemon with the people really helps make it a cohesive world. |
AngelFaux chapter 1 . 4/10 Just reread the prologue, it's very interesting to see that AZ wasn't actually the king but a royal advisor. The death of a Goodra serving as the spark to ignite what sounds like a cold war is good. The king is an intriguing man. Let's see how he acts. |
AngelFaux chapter 2 . 4/9 It's a pleasant suprise to see this update. The prince and his pokemon are definitely interesting. I really like Seviper so kudos for that. The bits of world building and lore are good. Looking forward to more |
AngelFaux chapter 1 . 10/12/2019 This has a lot of potential, I'm excited to see how this goes. I'm definitely looking forward to more. |
Jessica sucks Austin's cock chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 Hey fuck you |