I love this. It's a great interpretation of each Mage Sister and I look forward to see what more you do with them...and more of Star Allies Unite

Hey, great stuff! A bit of a pet peeve of mine is, well, I doubt the Three Mage Sisters would call the Jambastion religion a ‘cult.’ To us as outsiders, it definitely appears to be a cult, but I doubt the believers would use such a negative term to describe it. Correct me if I’m wrong, but I believe the Japanese version of Star Allies calls them the Jambastion Religion anyway.
Other than that, great stuff! I love all the cheesy speeches of friendship, they fit the Kirby world really well. You’re a constant source of inspiration to me, so keep it up!

That was really a twist of emotions there! I'll just say that this really suits each of the mages really well in the way you portrayed them to be and then more. Really awesome to see that!