Very nice! I quite enjoyed reading Darcy's perspective.

Well done! Excellent exercise in writing, but what's more is it was enjoyable as a reader! Thank you for taking the time to write this. It is different, having it written in second person, but it isn't distracting and rather adds an interesting element to it. Well done!

I am re-reading my Bridget Jones books at the moment - in these Corona times a book, that makes you laugh out loud is priceless - and when I read this sentence: "...learn new skills: how to woo a lady", it reminded me of those books. All we need now is an account like this: Minutes spend on thinking about Elizabeth today: 563, good ideas of how to woo her: 0, self-help books found on the subject of wooing a lady: 0.

Great job so far. Thanks for posting.

Very nice! I believe this is the first story in second person format that I have truly enjoyed. Brava!

I enjoyed that. Well done.

I am sure Darcy would love a compromise.

And so on to that final question: does she or does she not?

So we have come to that disaster.

We know how this turns out, as I have said, but you are doing an excellent job filling in his side of the story.

I do hope Charles does as expected...we know he does.

So Caroline is ignored in large part.

Caroline is stewing, I am sure.

Well done...keeping Caro at bay.

Where is he off to now? On with the show.

Again...thanks.