Reviews for Obsession
Scissors Dolphin chapter 1 . 7/29
If you can't write a summary, I can't trust you to write a good story.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 22 . 2/28/2018
I stopped caring because all the characters being dumb.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 7 . 2/28/2018
Another chapter of character holding the idiot ball, amazing. Because there is nothing strange about a person using a wheel chair right?

And Vegeta decides to be that nasty?
Scissors Dolphin chapter 6 . 2/28/2018
Ok, why is Bulma being stupid?

Why are my reviews just asking why the characters are being stupid?

There is a difference between pride and stupidity. There is a difference between conflict and people eating the idiot ball.

Bulma is just being stupid, not prideful. Both of them alternative eat and shit out the idiot ball, and that is all the conflict. This is not fun; it just makes people frustrated. Solving these conflict isn't satisfying because these are dumb conflicts that can easily be solved. It's like reading a story about a guy solving a problem that could have been solved by turning a computer off and on again. It doesn't matter what happens, because the conflict is silly.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 4 . 2/28/2018
What the fuck is going on?

NO IM NOT GONNA HELP I HELP NO ONE FUCK THE THING THAT WILL KILL US.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 2 . 2/28/2018
Ok, why is Vegeta being a complete dumbass?

He was seriously injured and needed healing. So instead of coming to the most obvious basic conclusion, he comes up with an outlandish and obviously stupidly false one? That she is trying to hamper his training, after providing so much for him?

Why do these conflicts have to so fake?
DeannaBear chapter 22 . 1/14/2017
Are you still updating this? O.o I was just wondering? yes or no? I really like this story! So if you could, Update this!
Kamehamehakid chapter 5 . 7/11/2016
Loooooooooooovvvvvveeee
Prl16 chapter 22 . 3/25/2016
The thing I liked the most was the way Vegeta saw Bulma in his eyes, he was so enamoured with her, and then he did or said something opposite of what he was feeling. He's totally a tsundere.
jasminxo chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
Oh my i love it already !
Zinger56 chapter 17 . 2/3/2015
This was definitely by far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I been reading fanfictions for a good while now, and this has by far been the most shocking,loving, most creative story I have read. No one has ever thought of an idea like this before. My favorite part was when you tell us that Bulma is paralyze. I also liked the fact when Bulma and Vegeta first got together that you didn't make it some corny sneaky relationship that they hid from everyone. I also like that Vegeta showed his soft side without you changing his actual character. Overall this was a great story you should continue making even if you haven't been in here in a while.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 6 . 10/25/2014
God, I always hate reading such regretful parts of the story, but then again, I know an upside awaits.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 5 . 10/25/2014
Wow, that was truly amazing!
pillowtae chapter 22 . 9/6/2014
I'm sort but can't do you do something like they use the dragonballs and revive the people of Earth? It's just so sad that everyone just died ;;
VegetasPrincess174 chapter 22 . 7/16/2014
Yes finally it's over .
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