Nice story, goodluck, i just there's more fluffines, im curios will blake become brocon or jaune become siscon or jaune the only one blake allowed to pet her on beacon so many possibilities for fluffines, anyway good luck

UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS FLUFFY AND ADORABLE!

Why are you calling them yellow and black just call them by there names it’s more simple

AHHHHH IT'S SO FLUFFY I WANNA DIE

Is illia gonna come out
Is she also gonna have a crush on jaune
Illia vs blake for jaunes affection

I like the premise and it has a lot of promise. But your tensing makes it a bit harder to read. Overall though, i like it

I think people like this, for it takes on a different scenario that isn’t used too much in the rwby story community, like we do see some stories where he is raised by different families, but I don’t think I have ever read one where he was raised by Blake’s family. So, this is a new scenario for being raised by different family’s for Jaune. The only time I could think of him being with the Belladonna’s is when he was pretty much everyone’s brother.

cuteness overload... i wanna hug them...i know they wont stay always that small but you made them cute as hell..
though maybe less the amount of nicknames for Jaune and Blake. I find it a bit weird for adult to call Jaune yellow.
but in total good chapter.. wanna see where this story goes to.

Love this story, good job!

Okay. Guess we're going for a family friendly adventure. Lots of happy feels - wait, this is M rated?

Please don’t call them black or yellow

Really wholesome.
But, why do you go back and forth with calling them Yellow and Black?

noice
very wholesome

The fluff... it's... suffocating me...
Hrk, Blegh.
Am ded from too much fluff.
Am still happy.

An unlikely scenario. But an interesting one.

I kinda want to see where you take it.