HOW SWEET! SO KAWAII!

I always imagine the ending should be something like this instead of leave us hanging like that. Good job

Nice short story. I think you should fix your grammar first before uploading it but it's still a nice story to read. It would be nicer to read if you had more description to your story. Good luck with your future stories.

Yessss;! That's what we wanted!

You know, if you hated the ending so much, why did you copypaste the entire chapter? The only change I see is that you added the final scene. You think that makes it better? Sadly no, it doesn't.

For one, the love confession felt too rushed and OoC for Soma. Given the kind of person he is, I'd expect something more similar to what his mother did. Heck, he could even use a DISH to propose to Erina right then and there. Second, there's too much dialogue and little narration, so there's no focus on the characters' thoughts and feelings, making the confession feel rather empty. And third... why the lack of full stops and the lower cases at the beginning of the dialogue lines? Seriously, that's something you need to polish.

I'm sorry if I sound harsh. Just for the record, I'm a SomaxErina supporter, but to make a good story, sometimes it takes more than making the ship happen. The HOW you make it happen is also important, you know.

YES, it should have ended in such a way instead of taking the crappy way out
Thanks :)

This is so sweet! Better ending than the manga3

That was so sweet. And I love it, continue writing more fanfics. You really have a gift.

Amazing I xant wait for another amazing sorina fiction

Nice! Thank you. I enjoyed it

Much better than the manga ending.