Hope you return to the story soon. I wish i found this story in a lot earlier when you are making it.

This is fucking hilarious, please update this soon. And yeah Taylor having a Yuri harem is making me laugh so I hard I couldn’t breathe, so congratulations. That’s a rare feat for me.

Hey Selector, (if you are reading this anyway)

I really like your story and would really like it if it continued.

I only have two points of advice:
1: You might want to get a proof-reader to check for some of the grammatical errors.
2: You might want to try and made your story a bit easier to follow, I quite often lose the thread and find it hard to find out who is who, or some of the abbreviations are kind of hard to understand.

Finally, I find it important to state that the above points do not mean that your story is bad or even not great they are just pointing to some points that would make your story more approachable for people.

Anyway thanks and have a nice day.

I managed to read halfway through this chapter, but i have to quit now.
It's not the story itself that bugs me, but the style you have written it.
As i see it, the fic is a collection of snippets instead of a story. It is missing transitions and context, which is imho very confusing.
I just am not able to follow it.
But i hate snippets anyway, so meh

Well damn, that last chapter convinced me that Taylor really was gay for Emma. It fits, kinda. Once again, good story.

Stories where Taylor slowly becomes God are great.

Stories where it happens because her own power gets Unlocked, are even better.

Stories where Taylor has a building Girl Harem, are just icing on the cake.

This is all of that.

I love it.

Thanks to your summary, I just pictured Taylor as Agatha from Twilight Princess

Great chapter and story so far , I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.

Interesting take. Didn’t realize it was one of yours for a bit

uhh that line break is so confusing

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

sooooooo muuuuuuuch craaaaaaaaaaack. it's such a beautiful fix fic cluster fuck. nice work.

Tinking helps my thinking. That line gave you an A. I really like the way you have made this humorous.

Great job on this chapter!

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this i love this story thou it sad to see you so focused on it that your ignoring titanfall and gunbunny any ways please continue to update as life allows