Reviews for Written in Stone
Sunflower424 chapter 4 . 3/13
I’m loving this story! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
LauraB90 chapter 4 . 12/5/2019
hope you update soon! I really like this story!
LegolasGreenleaf chapter 4 . 12/5/2019
This is a really great story. Please continue
Fenostole chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
J’aime beaucoup cette fiction, s’il te plaît continue la !
Fenostole chapter 4 . 11/4/2019
Bonjour,
Comme tu peux le voir, je t'écris en français car mon anglais est vraiment horrible (merci Google trad pour la traduction de cette fiction) !

J'ADORE !
Je n'ai pas grand chose d'autre à dire...

S'il vous lait continuez d'écrire !
Hermione Blackwell chapter 4 . 10/24/2019
Please continue
Hermione Blackwell chapter 2 . 10/24/2019
Wonder now Dumbledore will use her for her seers gift.
Hermione Blackwell chapter 2 . 10/24/2019
I thought Hermione wasn’t supposed to say anything about her gifts.
Hermione Blackwell chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
So excited to continue!
Hermione Blackwell chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
Sounds fantastic!
gatoryn chapter 4 . 10/21/2019
Love it so far! Can’t wait for more :)
Lost O'Fallon Girl chapter 4 . 10/3/2019
Very interesting
icarus enjoyed the view chapter 3 . 10/3/2019
I really like this story! Love Hermione and James as twins!
Two small things: in Britain we say pudding rather than dessert. So Dumbledore would say "we're having custard for pudding"
The other thing is you've given into the trend of many in fanfiction of greatly inflating point gain. In the books students typically only get one point for answering a question, and maybe five at most for doing something extra ordinary. When Harry and them gain and lose 50 points it's an extraordinary feat. Typically children lose points in larger amounts than they gain them, to greater discourage bad behaviour. Hermione and James gaining fifty and twenty points a piece seems a bit unrealistic. Fifteen and five would be much more realistic and less likely to cause massive uproar from the students for favouritism.
Overall though, that's a very minor issue. It's a great story, keep it up!
BratGirl1983 chapter 4 . 10/3/2019
I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update
blacksbear chapter 4 . 10/2/2019
I love Hermione in this! Being on Malfoy’s bad side might bring her bad luck, but it makes me so proud of her
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