If only... This was so sweet!

That second profession of live was beautiful

Oh gosh, I had always thought he just let out a breath, I never realized it was a "please."

Omg! this is just too sweet, and i loved it!

Lovely!

Beautiful. I love that they reached out to each other and tried to better express themselves.

Wow... absolutely wonderful...can you extend the story?

Oh, that was neat. I loved that, Erin! It's lovely to think maybe if they had talked it out right then and there they would have saved themselves months of sadness. But Austen being the writer she was, gave us so much. And every ugly scene (that we wish we could rewrite,) is important to the plot and eventual Happy Ever After. I've thought a lot about this. But realizing this, that every thing in her books is there for a reason, I still love reading fan fiction variations. Now I have another author to follow.

My heart goes out to you, a mom with 4 special needs children. God bless you every day, every moment. What an incredible road you have to travel.

Watching that movie for the first time...The sexual chemistry between the two actors was so strong I kept thinking, "They're going to kiss...that's not in the book." Sweet alternate ending here - thank you.

This story was sweet and I enjoyed it!

I have watched that scene possibly hundreds of times and never noticed that before! Very well written I must say, this just adds yet another loving layer to Darcy

OMG, I never noticed that either but just rewatched it and barely heard it! So glad you wrote about it!

One of the most sweet scenes ever write for P&P. Thank you so much for share

Now I have to rewatch it, again... Obviously. Great story!

Lovely! I will have to check out that 'Please' so interesting!