even in canon if naruto was told to fight he wouldn't scream yatta like a child

I like it when are you going to make more chapter's please let me know keep up the great work and thank you for the story

Good job, waiting for update.

Maybe you should give Naruto some kind of knives?

Prayin for that new chapter

Great story so far! I hope that you continue it at some point!

Damn, first Raven's Sage and now this? To be completely honest, I discovered both these stories independently of each other in a span of hours; I didn’t find them through your profile, but through searching. Still, both this and RS are amazing so far, and I really hope to see an update for either of them soon!

Overall, its kind of good.
Except the animu gimmick in the writting that make me cringe and some cheap shortcut there and there, its solid otherwise.
Right amount of description and correct vocabulary.
There's a sense of direction in the story wich is good.
Character even stay on character, thing that is quite rare on this site.
Lots of thing to improve but solid crossover.

"Hey, i was super exausted to the point of not being able to move, BUT NOW I CAN, so i'll help you, no question asked"
"Haha, nice, i would like that of course i won't ask you anything too, 'cause y'know?"
"Riiiiighht?"
"Hahahaha"
"Hahahaha"

1 - Yeah, lets not try to say that there's some people use a different type of energy in all of remnant. Lets tell them that he's from another dimension
2 - And look, everyone accept it as if he just said "apple is a fruit", who knew dumbass idea worked like a charm

Don't use -chan for christ sake. Don't be a weeb. Stop writting animu style. Don't use anime's gimmick. You're writting a story. Use writting gimmick. In english. No one want to see half assed japanese notion randomly put there and there..

Interesting turn of events... Keep up the good work! This is quality work I tell ya, believe it! :D
Still hoping for the NaruAmber tho. I mean, she's in a similar situation as Naruto, but then again, so is Ruby (Silver Eyes with no idea or clue about her heritage like Naruto for most of his life). But... Amber had to constantly be moving, never staying in any one place for more than a few days. Thus, having no hope for a romantic relationship, and is thus more or less alone, like Naruto, but also still has a few friends who know about her and her status, like Naruto. So, yeah... anyways...

Ja Ne~!

Y'know, I'm honestly hoping for a Naruto x Amber story since we don't have enough of those. Otherwise, my vote would go to Ruby cuz adorable innocence maniac. But I can't deny Weiss is a good choice too. Anyways, keep up the good work! Can't wait for more! :3

Ja Ne~!

For a weapon you should keep it simple and not have a gun in it as that would throw off the Ninja vib Naruto has been putting up so far. Personally, I think some type of Ninja weapon that Naruto has already seen or something like some chains since Uzumaki's (yes I know it was the females but come on) could make them with their chakra. And Naruto just finds something like that that he feels a connection to or something.

The Pairing Should be NarutoXRuby they just go together better than Naruto and Weiss