| Reviews for Thinking Out Loud |
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Frosty Wolf chapter 1 . 8/22 A very entertaining story, as well as a realistic take on Kim and Ron trying to fit their work into the less forgiving world of college as opposed to their time as high school students. That real world experience would also account for their slowly evolving morals. I just wish there was a second chapter when they realize that just getting rid of that diamond is a waste when it could also make those pesky student loans disappear...and maybe make some money for a good charity. They'd have to bring Wade around to their new way of thinking, but I think they could do it! |
ride-on-the-woff-side chapter 1 . 7/4 good little story, legitimately good writing |
Pravana chapter 1 . 5/17 Very noice |
derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 5/13 kim smirking at her boyfriend ron hey zorpax is retired |
Ldrmas chapter 1 . 2/14 Thats awesome love it thanks for the story! |
MBedbed chapter 1 . 1/15 This is AWESOME! I didn’t believe I could enjoy reading a one-shot this much. Its pretty much in a league of its own (along with auto co-wrecked. Like dude you are the best at these things!) how you get to make them sound exactly in character I dont know but hats off. Outstanding job. Hope you get more ideas and write a couple more of these |
MBedbed chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Amazing Probably my favorite kp oneshot ever Please continue giving us stories like this |
Bobtrumpet chapter 1 . 11/4/2019 Very nicely done. Great dialog. Not just in general, but for a slightly more mature Kim and Ron. Favorited. Glad you’re still writing KP stuff! |
grecefar chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 This was so awesome, funny, in character, etc. It could be an amazing story, I don't think I've ever read a fic of Kim and ron being thieves, ron being bad yeah but both of them?, but still if it just a one-shot it was great, added to favorites. |
starfiction123 chapter 1 . 9/27/2019 Oh my gosh I loved this read! It was hilarious! Very much in character and realistic! See this is why lol they need to simply dispatch global justice to do such dirty work while they chill lol. It'd have been so much more satisfying watching will du lose his mind keeping up with that thing. Oh well...they'd make a heck of a Bonnie and Clyde...no pun intended |
MrDrP chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 I can't say why but I really, really enjoyed this story. It was well-written, perfectly-paced, and in keeping with the spirit of the show. Well done. |
CallMeMatrix chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 I'd like to see a follow up scene where they get called in to investigate their own crime. |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 Well, Kim and Ron had enough, the talk was an idea that evolved and it certainly cooled them down, unfortunately the diamond came back to bit them and now their talk because a reality, wow. Sure wasn't expecting them to become thieves in the end but it kinda makes sense after Kim and Ron grew to hate the diamond. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 I believe that those who 'rode those free ponies' for too long are gonna regret what comes from this... And that going Cheap by keeping Team Possible on eternal speed-dial like this is going to cost them so badly... I hope Ron is able to save a piece of that diamond that isn't traceable to make a ring for their wedding... CB73 |
daccu65 chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 No good deed ever goes unpunished. Trying to do the right thing has cost them dearly and they've had enough. There's an old saying that if you provide charity long enough, the recipients start to look at it as something they're entitled to. The question is, what will they do with the rock once they get it back? Will it be destroyed, hidden, or broken down and sold? Maybe they can keep a piece of it for an engagement ring? I liked the tale. This is how good people go bad. |