| Reviews for The Terran Transformation |
|---|
  Guest chapter 2 . 7/17 150,000 light years is really far you would be out of the galaxy by that point |
 IamKroGan1 chapter 7 . 7/2 Oft, this is not a good story. Moronic council, arrogant Humans, saintly Quarians who need humans to save them from the beastly council. These fics are a dime a dozen on this site. |
| SteelfistJon chapter 5 . 5/30 It's nearly 2 in the morning, I just finished chapter 3, I have one thing to day (sorry for crude language): the council races are fucked. |
| Amun565 chapter 4 . 5/6 Humans can intercept reaper communications, but not citadel ones? |
| Azaira chapter 7 . 4/22 Love everything up to the point of the Andromeda mention, cuz that goes against everything I know about the reapers. |
| Hadrian.Caeser chapter 11 . 4/20 Nice. |
| EvilTheLast chapter 11 . 4/3 Good update. I was expecting more battles or something in this chapter. I guess I have to wait until the next chapter. |
| Okami Princess chapter 11 . 4/2 I wonder what will happen to the slaves that were from the Council species? I mean, their governments practically abandoned them to Batarian slavery didn’t they? Maybe it could be a good way to empathize that it’s not the entirety of the people of Citadel Council space that are condoning slavery (no people are unanimous, especially with something as abhorrent as slavery), and that the governments of Council space as they are now that are the real problem. |
| Vinyard26 chapter 11 . 4/2 I can't see a poll on your profile. is this story posted somewhere else as well? |
| Coment9 chapter 11 . 4/2 Interesting |
| Vinyard26 chapter 10 . 3/26 just caught up. love they way you have expanded the world in this new direction. Can't wait to see where you take this! |
| kenodoxia chapter 5 . 2/19 sorry, as soon as you started the interaction with the quarians, you lost me. Every organization, and every organism is driven by self interest, be it survival, sustenance, wealth, power, acclaim etc. Why would the quarians immediately act like a beggar, or a swindler and give out so much free information. And why would the humans here immediately bring the aliens over and start giving free information and promises. Nothing is ever given freely. Why would the human commander burn through his political clout for an unknown species. You made the whole interaction and both sides seem extremely weak, and naive... |
| James chapter 10 . 1/14 WHat a great story you have going. I hope you continue this and continue to improve your writing skills. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13 Eu |
| Pteaset chapter 10 . 1/13 So good ty |
