Love it

Nice update. Hope everything goes ok with the surgery

Hope to read more soon.

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I love the relationship between her and Paul. I know Paul is known to be Mr. Angry but I feel that there is always a caring part to everyone -whether that means caring for others or yourself- and that the pack leans for to caring for others since they were created for the protection of their people and they have bonds connecting them to each other! Question did she see them actually change? I don’t think that she did but just want to make sure!

Love the detail of him almost folding her on half! Haha! I can see him so focused on trying to put on something she’d like that he wouldn’t even be away of what was happening otherwise!

I just was looking for a story to read... I’ve always loved the idea of the pack so I tend to gravitate towards those stories... and I found yours! I’m really excited for what you have in store for us! Also I’m sorry I didn’t review on the other chapters I’ll go back and do that! I was wondering if there will be any Bella drama coming up? I’ve never really liked her character; for me she comes across as very self centered and views herself to be always morally just. I think I’d like to see her reaction to Jacob imprinting but also the packs reaction to her’s... just an idea! Hope you’re doing great!

I like this! I'm watching for the next chapter.