Reviews for Mass Effect: The War for Freedom
Arrowtotheknee chapter 1 . 8/25
I call bullshit I on the faster then light Railgun. That’s not physically possible even with Element zero bullshittary.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/24
so the first few chapters were intresting the last 2 not so much ... to the point that i skipped most of it and am now stop reading this repetitive boring story ...
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24
the outcome of this battle was already described in the previous chapter ... this is just boring and i skiped 80% of this chapter ...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/24
yeah i don't think any leader with common sense would leave a new military base that is under construction and also at the FRONT LINE unprotected ... this entire battle feels incredibly staged

"oh look at that the only known way into human space just so happens to have a completly unprotected base there that just so happenes to be attacked" ...
George Cristian810 chapter 12 . 7/24
This story doesnt make any sense from the very first chapter .
It is worse then HFY type of stories .
George Cristian810 chapter 1 . 7/24
The numbers are all wrong . No single country economy could sustain something like US space fleet and construction .
Coment9 chapter 12 . 7/23
Geez talk about FUBR
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 1 . 6/1
Love
Coment9 chapter 11 . 4/14
Huh so sunset IS a experimental super soldier or at least an argument human.

As for John’s reasoning and his character...I like those who put others before themselves that all I’m gonna say.

As for the Four-eyes Oooooh sounds like their in trouble! (Does a happy dance)
Guest chapter 10 . 4/6
cool
Blaze1992 chapter 10 . 4/6
WHAT THE F**K DID THAT COME FROM?!
The armed forces chapter 10 . 4/6
Can’t wait for the rest
Coment9 chapter 10 . 4/6
Whoa some upgrades! Any reason for them or did they just sound like something TF141 would need?

Also not that I mind but I can’t help but notice all the Easter egg references in this chapter like the new armour which reminds me of either the doomSlayer’s armour or the Marauder armour from Starship troopers traitor of mars.
Lonely Samurai chapter 10 . 4/6
why is a democracy making slaves unless they already set it up so they have 4 tours or something to pay of being made then are free and there are laws going into effect so if others learn to do that they must do something similar.
Janny092 chapter 10 . 4/6
Bloody hell, I LOVE IT! I like the reference to the Doom Slayer’s Armor and the battalion that will form COD MW task force 141.
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