| Reviews for Death's Last Prophecy |
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Raymondjay41 chapter 3 . 4/1 Interesting story so far |
attacktitan100 chapter 3 . 3/10 your A/N is correct but some stories take it to the extreme and portray a cruel harry , mainly in time travel ones where he punishes children or be extremely rude for silly inconsequential stuff |
attacktitan100 chapter 1 . 3/10 i dont know (obv) what the story be but the prophecy was awesome |
BlackGodofDarkness chapter 3 . 3/6 Love the story |
sunandkp chapter 3 . 2/29 Damn well agree |
sunandkp chapter 1 . 2/29 Wow, new take on time travel? |
BillBrink chapter 1 . 1/11 I just know I'm going to enjoy this one. I love redo's, but usually the most boring chapter is the first. Your's had imagination. Thanks. |
god of all chapter 3 . 1/8 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 12/12/2019 I dont think I like this version of Harry, seems to uncaring and arrogant like Malfoy. He just does what he wants regardless of whether its right or wrong and he so casually thinks about just killing off any nuisances, including people, that irritate him? |
MrKlortho chapter 3 . 12/5/2019 Also really enjoying the start to this story. Can’t wait to read more |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/3/2019 Three hours ago: "Another prophecy/chosen one story" *clicks on story out of boredom* Now: "Why are there only three chapters?" Needless to say, I like the story. Good worldbuilding too, but I think you should add more description, mostly for important characters. Maybe I missed it, but I have no idea what Daphne, Astoria, or Amelia Bones look like at all. A couple typos here and there - crase/crass made me really pause and wonder - and the narration sometimes switches back and forth between past and present tense. I like how no-nonsense/ruthless you portrayed Harry, but I would not say he "constantly" broke the rules in canon. He only did so when necessary or when he got tricked into it. And he only got punished for it with detentions and a loss of house points, when Dumbledore did not outright reward him, so no big deal. Had a teacher threatened him with expulsion and going back to the Dursleys full-time, I have a feeling that he would have turned into a model student in an instant. Looking forward to see what happens next. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/2/2019 I'd love to see more this is an interesting start to a story! :) |
ThingsCanBeTwoThings chapter 3 . 12/4/2019 I'm interested to see where this goes! Great start. |
DGHP4EVER chapter 3 . 12/2/2019 Really lovely story cant wait for it the action to start |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2019 Snape dating lily ? Yeah I draw my line there! Bullshit fiction |