Really good ending! I like all the setup you managed to fit in there for the League and can’t wait to see it form in the next book. You should feel proud for completing this whole first part, man.

Wow, Talia really has no respect for the dead does she?

Congrats on finishing the first book!

Oh well as one door closed another one opens and have to say that was an absolutely stunning brilliant epically fantastically awesome kuckass finale to what what has been an utter gem of a fic and a privilege to read.

Ah well loved how Talia’s plans all turned to dust in the heat and turmoil of battle due to her lack of any moral code causes her last remaining Lt to turn against her and lose the battle and majority of the black spider clan.

Though, that is only the battle, lost and the war is still there to be won and eagerly looking forward to seeing What Talia does next as she will have an even harder task next time around fighting a city of heroes, assassins and citizens all united in the goal of saving and defending their city.

Dang, Talia doesn’t have much respect for the dead! I think you did a great job describing the fights without getting too bogged down in the minutia. This chapter really had a flow and energy to it, and I’m excited for part 2!

Wow, this was a well-written chapter!

I liked the almost bittersweet ending that the two rivals Genshin and Ryu had, and I'm interested to see how Talia and the others fare against everyone else.

I'm also interested to see how you end this book, and how you will continue this story into the sequels we have discussed on the Discord channel.

Keep up the good work.

Outstanding work! Keep it up!

Take THAT Eobard. Black Canary and the League are gonna be coming for youuuuu. Loved this chapter, man, really. Oliver’s rage about Carter Bowen was everything I always wanted, and I loved the reunion between the Lance sisters, as well as Nyssa’s happiness in making it happen. Excited for the end of book 1!

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Laurel was fated to die in the original timeline? Is that a reference to 11:59 or something else? I hope that Eobard's mistake means that Laurel gets to live to old age and has a family. It's the least she and Ollie deserve after the hell they will inevitably endure.

Keep up the good work, mate.

Keep it up!

I can't recall if you have said what Sara's middle name was in previous chapters, or if it is her canon middle name is Marie or not, but I like that you kept with the Lance motif of having older sounding names.

Keep up the good work, mate.

Nyssa certainly is spreading her wings and doing what she can to stretch the rules, huh? I’m hoping we get the reunion between all the Queens and Lances soon and that Laurel gets to see her two sisters (by blood and by bond) starting to form a connection of their own. Very nice work reading the “something worse” Talia has planned. Looking forward to more.

Talk about bad luck

Keep it up!

Ooh boy it’s heating up now! I’m super excited to see what Thea, Sara and Dinah’s reactions to learning about their missing family members being alive. Also the scene between Laurel and Ollie was super cute. Great job with this!