Please tell me your going to finish this
I mean, please man
You already have enough incomplete fics
Speaking of which you should update your other fics too
Also finish this one man
I'm not trying to stress you, but come on, you can't just stop working on stuff half way
Anyway finish this, and maybe finish some other too
Just a suggestion, although I wish it wasnt

Nice touch of sexual content in this chapter.

The naked men and women being afraid of Marika might have something to do with her being an Armored War Goddess or it might have something to do with the Sonic Arrow she held in her hand or it could be both.

Minato is such a bad boss.

It’s good that Sparx’s debut ended with her winning. Ah yeah, Mars entered into his Final Form.

Is Shuyu still brainwashed in her relationship with Minato? On another topic, it’s good to see expansion on Minato. The idea of Dai Shi giving Minato a new life, and a new body where he is still technically a ghost who could maintain a corporeal form is a helpful idea for me on my fics.

Sonken’s sister would be rolling in her grave over what Saito did to Son Go.

We finally get to see Masataka after so much absence.

It's pretty obvious at this point that Dai Shi is gonna make Minato and Shuyu suffer (before they die to him or the Alliance) in a future chapter after what you revealed in this chapter.

Not bad work on this chapter.

Hmm...that ending with Masataka, I do wonder what's going to happened next.

please help Nagata and Kanu continued there relationship so he and his harem to be happy and love again love too see that soon please thank you.

I like the conflict between Kanu and Iori. I would like to see the other Shoku Warriors in Nagata’s harem having confrontations with Iori.

I see Teiiku noted issues with Iori, something that Sousou would keep in mind when she learns of them.

It is nice to see Gaim resolving the battle against Baka by talking the Rinrinshi down. Talking antagonists doesn’t happen much in stories, does it?

It’s good having those two Rinrinshis showing up in this story’s chapter.

Man...this chapter was emotional too. But in a good way, and not to mention it was alright as well.

Yo. It has been a while since my last review. I keep up with the story all this time but too lazy to write review.

I have 1 suggestion/request.
Since there are lot of original Kamen Riders and forms in these fic, it become rather difficult to follow.
Could you make special chapter to list all the original forms and OC Kamen Riders? Including description of how they looked like and what powers they possess would be even better.

Looks like the final battle will start real soon. Also, I like Gridon's new upgrade. He needs a theme some like, 'Teenage Mutant Ninja Gridon. Hero in a Hardshell, Kappa power!'

Naturally Nagata still has nightmares about what he's gone through, it was very traumatic after all. Also I do believe that Iori will eventually burn all of his bridges, he's going through what I call a Protagonist Centered Morality Journey in which everything he does is justified in his eyes even though it may or may not be. That kind of journey are usually the paths down the slippery slopes into become a villain, would be very interesting and would make sense considering his character development and arc after all so far.

Love the chapter and hope to see the final climax, but one thing I’m confused that I did read all of the Sangokuden Saga and this one give me a confused now, is Nagata and Kanu still in romance relationship? That’s all I’m asking and if is, then I’m glad to hear it, but if not, then I feel so bad for them now:(

It is good of these three characters to have A Day in the Limelight. It is also good having this breather interlude before heading into the final battle.

Yeah, that’s right, Riri, don’t hate the doll because of who made it. I wonder if Iori was paranoid about that doll ever since Karasu’s betrayal.

Other than a possible line break that could’ve been added, the overall story is fine.
Nagata sure showed the Shoku Faction’s Armored War Gods his power.

The whole “Hopefully, nothing happened while they were away.” before cutting to showing Nagata ordering for the Lockseeds is good timing.

Iori is being a problematic dick for people. Then again all that favoritism doesn’t help with matters.

Dai Shi being a mastermind.

You know, considering how Iori's been thinking, I'm surprised that he didn't leave earlier, he has that feeling about him that he thinks he can do stuff by himself and refuses to be called out for his own actions and blaming others...kind of like Huey from MGS 5.

Maybe short interlude but this was not bad, and on the day of my birth too, what are the odds?