The only thing wrong with the story is the numbers of people in the beginning of the story in the van. their was 11 loud member that want to the grocery store lily and Lynn Sr stayed home in the episode. You should of had said 10 people were in the van after Lincoln runaway not 12 and 9 of the loud sister not 11.

I like how you took real episodes that had nothing to do with each other and thought of a clever way to tie them together.

Why didn't Rita ground Lynn Jr. for letting Lincoln convince her to play for him.

A few grammatical errors, but this was a nice story overall.

This was a nice little one shot. The actions of the characters make sense considering the circumstances they were under, and nobody really comes across as unlikable. I didn't realize how little mother and son bonding stories both in the show and fandom for Rita and Lincoln until you mentioned it. Only real complaint is that there was some awkward grammar at times that sounds strange to an English speaker.

By the way, I would have replied to your PM; but when I attempted to, it said the recipient's inbox was full.

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What have you done Rita this is what happens you slapped your son lives are ruined!

Great job man