Wow. I’ve never been a huge Theo/Hermione fan but your story completely changed things. Beautifully written, I can’t wait to read the rest of it.
Percy sucks, I think he might be the stalker? Jealous and petty about everything involving Theo.

Hey there! Just found this story recently and binged it in about two days. I like your writing style, the wording and such, the characters' portrayal and Theo's and Hermione's quips and jabs towards each other. The murders and the stalker thing seem realistic, and gives the feel of reading a suspense detective story. However, some things seem a little weird for me personally. Like the events seem to happen a bit sporadically, like the plot jumps from one event to another with no preamble, and it's a bit disorienting. Also, I was wondering, what exactly happened between Hermione and Theo that made her resent him so much in the beginning? Was it mentioned in the story and I just missed it, or is it gonna come up in the later chapters? As a reader, I am confused. Sometimes it seemed to me like you made a list of major plot points you wanted to address, and you just follow this list without filling the gaps in between with any additional details that would clarify things. I am in no way trying to offend you or insult you, but that was my observation as I kept reading. The premise was interesting enough for me to want to click on the story in the first place. Also I love Theomione, and the background you established for the characters. It's very realistic and true to their nature. So I am looking forward to read the next chapters and find out who the stalker is, and what else you have in store for them. Hopefully, I would understand everything that was unclear to me by the end of the story.
Best regards,
Roxy

Love this story. Your writing is amazing

Found and read this in one sitting now I'm hooked.

This story is amazing. I can’t wait for you to write more. Please keep up the good work!

This story is awesome. It’s been keeping my mind busy trying to figure it out. I hope your hiatus doesn’t last long because I can’t wait for the rest.

Love this story so far. Can’t wait to see what happens next

Ooooh good chapter 1! I'm full of intrigue!

This is really good I can’t believe I just found this! God I keep trying to figure it out but I haven’t I have too many thoughts plus the title keeps making me second guess whenever I think I know who it is haha!

This is a great story! Perfect amount of fluff, tension and drama xx

Tenter hooks I hope this does not draw out over hot coals.

I'm sad to hear this will be placed on the back burner, but I completely understand. As for the chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing the next clue uncovered as to who is the mastermind behind the attacks.

wow I'm so excited to see who is behind all of this! My money is on Percy!

I'm not sure Percy can be trusted to win the case.

I can’t wait for more