Reviews for Betrothal
River chapter 1 . 7/11
Tbh I really really like this pairing I think they would’ve made an awesome couple as well
Valkipher chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
Published in 2003
Lmfaoo
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2018
Just die
asmodeus prince of hell chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
Good work I enjoyed this fanfic
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 14 . 4/10/2018
Temari is a psychopath. Its actually killing my desire for Naruto's and Temari to get together. Temari deserves every injury she has gotten. She isn't behaving herself.
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 13 . 4/10/2018
They're sort of dicks Jiraiya. It wasn't even funny. They went to far. Disabling him and then throwing him out where an enemy could kill him isn't really funny.
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 9 . 5/1/2017
How sweet first kiss.. how sweet couple.. i am really enjoying this story.. are you adding tsunade to this story?
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 8 . 5/1/2017
So sweet naruto is so worry about temari's health.. i like sweet naruto.. i love NaruTema..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 7 . 5/1/2017
Poor temari, i really hate Shino in this chapter.. and what about hinata? She never told naruto his feelings , but now she want look beauty for him? I don't like hinata too!
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 4 . 5/1/2017
Temari in team seven? Very good.. to be a leaf ninja.. its simply a smart move.. because she and Naruto can spend more time togheter every da y.. i really like this..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 3 . 5/1/2017
Very bad naruto to say or at least half say things to temari. He hurt her feelings.. maybe them need a big apologize.. kankuro and Gaara are so good brothers to Temari, that letter melted my heart..
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 2 . 5/1/2017
Amazing.. kakahi is not s good person to do thetalk to naruto, he is so pervert.. but Iruka is too innocent.. poor naruto.. haha.
jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
Absolutely good idea! This like me because im a NaruTema fan.. Arranged marriage is the perfect idea of all!
Uzumaki spiral chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Good chapter lot of details
OriginalRabbits chapter 15 . 3/20/2013
The story was good. I really liked the bit where you describe how Sasuke reacts. Also when you talk about how Naruto's brain doesn't work until an hour after he is awake, that was funny. Give you a thumbs up for Tsunade trying to explain to him how babies are made, it's sad but I bet he really might not have known, and I like the way you had the training dummies all dressed up as people from the Chunnin Exams.
I was wondering if you would mind taking the "Good Person Test." It's a test that shows if you are a good person or not and how that effects you. It's easy to find, second search result on Google.
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