I am sorry I must sin and tell you that this is a great cool start to the story! but I must break the 69 reviews :(

Really enjoying the fic! You are doing a great job, only thing i would like to see changed is monique, could the explanation of her acronyms be put right after? I know some of them do, but I find it hard to follow the conversation when i only know what she said after the chapter. Euther way, great story!

Just found this fic, thx for the update

Nice update! So when will ron realize why he was holding himself back?

tutoring going well and he got a date nice

wonderful! I can't wait for the next installment.

Thanks for the update!

Ron sees the value of both dreams and certain desserts where it concerns Yori and Shego. But he soon manages to comfort Ann, the mature beauty bearing her pain to him and in return, Stoppable consoles her... and shares something truly intimate and special only with her. The foolish James Possible really let a true beauty go, and for what? A fling with a younger woman? What a fool...

And now Tara is getting all wound up because of her wanting to ask Ron out, with Bonnie coming to her aid. And soon, Stoppable and Tara are going to be going out on a real date! WHOO HOO!

I really like to see moments like this, and hope to see more in the future of Stoppable going on some real dates to get experience... and also to see the joys of going out with beautiful women! Hehehehe…

Keep it up!

Nice one! BTW is Ron going to hook up with Ann in the dreamscape? I mean it seems like that is where you are going.

Excellent work can't wait for more

When will Kim be back into this story as it has mostly been Ron and others, girls?

I would have ann go into either couples counciling and get a divorce that way, have a fight and break up, or have james cheat on her which would explain the not coming home from when she woke up from the bbq dream. Also will ron tell ann about the dreams and she draw the conclusion that he has been there and comforting her for a long time now?

On the info page thingy... see the last review about including harem members on summary page thing to understand this

Great job! I binge read all of the chapters today until 5:24 am. Really good so far. Although i do have one thing to ask if you can. Can you include the harem members in the summary/ description of the story? Cause i’m sure by now that it is not just a shego/yori/ann possible harem now but a shego/yori/monique/tara/bonnie/ann possible harem

Liking it so far! Although i noticed you use ugh( which sounds like ug) instead of using uh ( which sounds like uuu) which i think is unintentional but has been bothering me cause ugh sounds more rude than the other which ron really isn’t the one to use ugh more uh because he either doesn’t understand or is dumbfounded by one of the girl’s actions and isn’t able to concentrate thank you and keep it up:)

Glad someone noticed though to bad she didn't change tactics when she was what she was using didn't work.
Though it's sad that only like four people he knows realized he's more than he seems