nice work and i would like a update for this and the fairy tail story on aof and fanfiction

nice work i look forward to chapter 7 after what ever story your working on next

Pure unfiltered awe

So jane is a pedophile? Hmmmmm think I'm gonna stop reading now

Read it all in one go and hope that you keep going!

You used Walker intead of Walter once. Other wise great adaptation.

Ok so Carver is a pedophile and that’s bad. But Jane is one too and that’s so sweet and totally acceptable. Fuck off man Jesus Christ

Your aware. Jane is 19. A fully grown woman. And that clementine is 11 years old..

You brand carver a pedophile. But make it seem like Jane being one. Is perfectly ok.

The words double standard and hypocrisy come to mind.

Clementine being capable got nothing to do. With certain people being sick in the head.

love the fic

Tfw you have to age your character down by about 6 years to make the relationship remotely acceptable but then you pair her up with an 11 year old girl

Can't wait for the next chapter

I beat some sense into Kenny, so I think if Lee was around Kenny, Kenny would loosen up, and act more mature, and calm. My opinion anyhow. Kenny himself was in disbelief when Lee was bit, and you could HEAR the incredibly suppressed sorrow. So I think Lee's presence would make Kenny wise up, and do better.

So far, pretty good. No major errors at all, no stale dialogue, and proper grammar. Keep updating, we'd love more.

So far so good! This story looks pretty good so far!