Reviews for Locked Away
Animesama chapter 11 . 8/29
I’m sorry you lost interest in this story I personally have done the same trying to write one and I liked the ending and would have liked a bit more detail but I respect your decision. Thank you for the story that you did wright I enjoyed reading it. ;)
NazgulBelserion chapter 3 . 7/10
A fkin stutter Deku no way I'm reading this lol I always leave if Deku stutters I can't stand that shit like speak clearly fucker
Clay Bach chapter 4 . 2/23
it seems like english is your second language, but you write extremely well aside from a few writing errors.
kaleidoscope666 chapter 11 . 12/27/2019
that would be such a cool story! I'm sad you don't feel like finishing it, but I support your decision. Thank you for writing this much, it was good while it lasted! I also feel the TV show analogy, that's a perfect way to describe it! Happy holidays!
pedropedrin chapter 11 . 12/27/2019
oh well
nothing lasts forever soo
xgodxsendx chapter 11 . 12/26/2019
Have you tried writing a story where the character has emotions then eventually starts losing those emotions as the story progresses or how a story with a character that has a bunch of people around him yet he can’t express those emotions
ProjectIceman chapter 11 . 12/26/2019
Oh dear...the dreaded author note. Its a shame, I was enjoying the story very much too.

Well I'll keep an eye on any other stories you might make in the future. Have a happy new year!
RiceCakePlayz chapter 11 . 12/26/2019
it's a shame this ended, but honestly I felt the same way about the short MHA au I myself made and that's why it ended
Sageofchaos chapter 10 . 12/23/2019
hope to read more.
ichika aono chapter 10 . 12/20/2019
Ok one I like this whole idea of a story. 2 I llove that he now has the ability to remember things now.
Ok with him being on the drug for so long I feel as though he should have built up some kind of an immunity to it. Also with it constantly being pumped into him I feel he should be suffering withdraw. After all going cold turkey should have adverse effects with something like that.
I look forward to reading more. Till the next one.
Fangirling101B chapter 10 . 12/17/2019
Aaaaaaaah! This poor sweet child! I just wanna see Mina and the class's reaction to when he can dance unrestrained. This smol boi needs to grow! Can't wait for the next chapter!
ProjectIceman chapter 9 . 12/9/2019
Huh. His Quirk is a bit different than I was expecting it to be. I was honestly expecting a carbon copy of All-For-One's Quirk, but it doesn't steal Quirks for his use. It gives him the base version and powers up the original user. Very interesting.

It's similar to another story that I read called "Level Playing Field" where his Quirk is an AOE Effect Quirk that can both boost and break a persons Quirk Factor temporarily or in extreme cases permanently.

I look forward to the next chapter.
Amadeus Amadeus chapter 9 . 12/9/2019
That's it? That's the god-forbidden quirk? I will admit that in hands of villains in would be incredibly powerful, but it could also make all heroes that much stronger. Besides, the real kicker of the quirk is not even that obvious unless you specifically know.

If it was something like time control or instant death or even an enslaving quirk then I would understand the fear, but this is out of proportion. Hell, even Chisaki's treatment of Eri was better than that, and that's with him absolutely loathing her and her quirk being much more powerful. A yakuza with no morals treats someone he hates with more humanity than the government. That's absolutely preposterous
MosesArk Reborn2000 chapter 9 . 12/9/2019
Izuku was treated so poorly by his own government, its a miracle that he didn't turn into a villain early on.
They stunted his physical and mental growth to the point he has the body of a ten year old and severe mental issues such as memory and they thought that was OK?
And All Might, Nana would be ashamed of what you, you let fear allow a little boy, one of your biggest fans be treated like this and you didn't even have the heart to look sorry for him. That very same treatment is what breda the worst of Villains, people who are justified in hating the government and the system.
DemonMankey chapter 9 . 12/9/2019
You realise that this could cause severe political unrest if news of midoriyas treatment got out right?
I don't care what 'good intentions' they clain it was for, they took a small child and crippled him mentally ad well as fixed torture devices to him since he was what four? The thought that your government will endorse this behaviour would have rioting in the streets.
And All Might is apparently fine with it if it's a child born with the wrong quirk? Some 'Symbol of Peace' he's acting like, although for AFO I could at least understand. Even if I'd still condem hin for it.
How long before Mic has enough and spills it live over the air waves?
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