Absolutely loved the story. Thank you.

I loved it. For a moment I really thought it wasn't a happy ever After. My heart was destroyed, but now I'm heal and content. Ty for sharing

I finally got around to reading this story in one fell swoop. I did enjoy the twists and turns, thank you.

Wonderful read thanks for sharing.

That is FANTASTIC. so so good!

I am glad that the waiting time for e and d to get together was filled with growth and not just the characters stupidity. Good story. Thanks for writing.

This is a wonderful, engrossing story that takes the Lizzy from canon and shows her intelligence & resourcefulness. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I really like the story! especially the surprising friendship of Caroline and Elizabeth.

I really, really, enjoyed a nice and caring Caroline. I think I'm going write stories where Caroline is nice from now on.

Well done.

Great story.

You have no idea about large estates back then in England. Mr darcy says 1100 acres he owns. Wrong. It would be several thousands hectors.

Just read this the whole way through. Couldn’t sleep for finishing it. Perfection!

Great story my only dislike is the way you describe their jokes. I understand what you’re going for and that life was dull in their time period so a semi intelligent remark might be funny to these characters. The exaggerated humor or hilarity for very mildly clever remarks is a bit much. The hurst conversation is the perfect example. To most people this exchange would be mildly amusing and you describe them as laughing as though it’s the funniest exchange. The dialogue and description don’t warrant this kind of response...if the reader isn’t laughing out loud the characters shouldn’t be acting like everyone is a comedian or so damn clever...just have the dialogue match the responses!

Thank you to you and your wife for sharing this delightful book. I’m loving it, though I must say I’m not a fan of the modern phrases in this chapter, likepoor baby”, “good boy” and I think “I’m going to kill myself” is also in this chapter? It ruined the feel of this book.